I told myself that I had to post fic of some kind today because it's been and entire month since I've finished anything. And what do you know, it seems that self imposed deadlines do work.
This is part two of
Prague. I'm still not really sure where it's going, but I've got slightly more of an idea now than I did before, and there's even dialog.
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Oh. I love this. This and the coffee shop scene. I want to giggle but somehow that seems wrong because it's dark and deep under the surface amusement.
Brilliant. More. Soon. :D
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Yes, yes. It's like a hysterical sort of amusement making jokes just to keep up the facade (and that would be me making the jokes, not them). uh, yeah. XD.
I actually started writing more today. Hopefully it won't take a month to finsh this time. Thanks, dear.
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Hee. Nirvana. :-*
The coffee shop scene was lovely and I very nearly giggled at Blaise's disgust at cappucciono.
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As for the boys themselves... Christ. Blaise and the coffee, that was fabulous, and “Could you be more cryptic, please. I don’t think I’ve quite reached my cryptic quota for the week.”! Oh, man, I just cracked up.
And the coffee!man and B's “I don’t believe waiting tables is his primary line of work.” Just... I can't even express but at that moment, the whole scene fell into place and I was just there, man.
*adores* This was worth waiting for.
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the whole scene fell into place and I was just there, man and This was worth waiting for.
eeeee! *is inarticulate fool* *tackleglomp* *adores you and your feedback*
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I don't know why but I loved that line. Perfect, as usual.
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The only time of day when he feels right is just before sunset (just before sunrise would probably work too but that would mean getting up far far earlier than anyone on holiday /this is a holiday, right?/ ever should)...
<3 <3 <3
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