my brain frustrates me no end

[greenapricot]

Today is the perfect sort of day for writing, all rainy and all but, alas, I can’t seem to get the juices flowing. Very annoying. So, I've been going through all the files of half finish and for some reason not posted fic languishing on my hard drive

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[greenmartini26]

There's something so wonderful about this-

"It has taken years of slow seeping, like water through stone, but they have wound themselves around everything he does."

It completely captures the intensity and passion between Harry and Draco in a single phrase.

~Bree

[greenapricot]

I'm especially fond of that bit myself. In fact it's one of my favourite lines in the whole fic. Thanks so much. XD

...and your icon *cackle* sofunny.

[lunicanca]

<3!

This so beautifully portrays the relationship between Harry and Draco. Love how Draco's whole life revolves around Harry, and how he doesn't want it, but he knows that somewhere in him he does... gah, it's just too good to describe it in any other words. Your writing is so poetic, I just love it. :D

[greenapricot]

Poor ickle Draco, all obsessed and nowhere to go. heh. gah, it's just too good to describe it in any other words Really, all I need for a ego boost is that. No other words necessary. And, then you hit me with poetic. Really, you're too kind. thankyouthankyouthankyou. XD

[tilney]

I am going to copy-and-paste all of it, because, man, 'tis one of THE HOTTEST things I have ever read.

It will shatter their world. The world of sneers and sharp words and sharper glares and hatred so strong that it resonates between them like heat waves in the distance. Hatred so strong that it isn’t hatred anymore. They will stand there until the tension is thick in the air, like so much smoke, and they will both move at once. Arm will brush hand, hand will touch shoulder, fingers will trace jaw, minds will scream NO and whisper yes

[greenapricot]

'tis one of THE HOTTEST things I have ever read
gah. Really? And I was sure it was all horrible cliches and lameness. thankyouthankyouthankyou.

No, no. Ashamedment (that's not a word is it?) not allowed, 'cause, really, I totally understand. Obsessive!Draco=only way to go around it Oh so yes. That is the only way I can see him. 'Cause he is obsessive. He is.

[catling42]

Buh. *purrs* This is my new favourite thing ever. I heart this Draco so, so much. In fact, I think this may be my new second favourite Draco of all time (CassieClaire's is my favourite). Love the tendrils of his obsession taking over, and the sneakiness, the liking Potter slipping in way under his radar. Love. Ooh, and how he knows Potter's schedule. Love!
Also, with the hotness. Muchly. Can't even go there.

And then there are lines like these
All of this is just a bit unreal too, in the silver grey light of not-quite-dawn. He tries to keep the thoughts there, in the dark, in the night, bottled up and safe. It is only safe to really think them at night or something might break. He might break.
that could've come out of my own mind. Hee :-D

(yes, I am slowly going through your whole website... it amuses me :)

[greenapricot]

This comment seems to have gotten lost in my inbox for a bit but. Yay! So glad you liked it. Like him. I like this Draco too the poor conflicted sod. And I'm realizing now that my Draco who's with Harry (or wants to be) feels quite a bit different than the one with Blaise. I wonder if that's just 'cause he is or 'cause this one was first and the other is a progression. *ponders* Or maybe that's just me having vague memories of them both it being so long since I wrote either of them.

that could've come out of my own mind.
I lvoe things like that. That's how I feel about a lot of longsunday's writing (which you should check out btw).