I believe the poles are shifting.

[greenapricot]

My entry for the June Coil challenge. Theme of summer. And, well, it sort of got away from me a bit and, I can't say that the theme of this is summer exactly, though it does take place during the summer. I did manage to use *counts on fingers* 12 out of the 15 words (depending on what the definition of using the words is. If I'm not allowed to use

Comments

[simmysim]

that was wonderful. you fucking rock SO hard.

i would rate this an "r" though ... just to be safe... considering that there's blatant talk of cocks and cocks being put in people's mouths. ^^;

[greenapricot]

you fucking rock SO hard.
eeeeeeee.*bounces* thanksomuch.

considering that there's blatant talk of cocks and cocks being put in people's mouths.
Oh, yeah there is that. heh. *runs off to change rating*

[simmysim]

taking this for the emporium? *smiles v.v.v. big in a v.v.v.v. convincing way*

[greenapricot]

Emporium? *looks around*
*finds link*
*browses around*
*gets distracted by pics*
Oh, right you asked me a question.

*nods enthusiastically*
yesyes, sign me up. And, let me know when it's there. K? :)

[jingdono]

*nosebleed*

guh ... with the "every shadowmovement is Blaise" and the "fabric draped loosely over tanned skin" and the sweltering sun ...

my favourite moment, however, is this:
This particular passage ends just at the edge of the lake where the soil is moist and water drip drip drips from the moss covered stone ceiling, down Draco’s neck and under the collar of his shirt no matter where he sits. Most likely cursed.

Yes. Most likely. Wonderful. Shall friend you, if you have no objections.

[greenapricot]

*hands you a tissue*

I'm particularly fond of that bit myself so, yeah, glad you liked it. :)

Wonderful.
thankyouthankyouthankyou

Shall friend you, if you have no objections.
Of course, go right ahead. Shall friend you back.

[greenapricot]

heh. That should have been of course not, 'cause I have no objections. Should read these things before I hit post.

I hated this. In the Draco sense of the Word.

[mousapelli]

And by Hated, I mean, wanted to crawl up in bed with it and shag it mercilessly.

It's so much fun to write about what Draco hates, isn't it? His hatred of heat and sun and summer, i think, is particularly Canon. Excellent work!

Re: I hated this. In the Draco sense of the Word.

[greenapricot]

It's so much fun to write about what Draco hates, isn't it?
heh, yeah. I thinki it's almost like an addiction. Everything seems to come back to what Draco hates.

His hatred of heat and sun and summer, i think, is particularly Canon. Excellent work!
Thank you thank you. It's alway great to hear that what I'm writing fits with canon.

[tilney]

Ohgodohgodohgod do that again.

This is--perfect. This is how I want to write when I grow up. This is snarky and dissatisfied and so Draco, the power freak. And so sensual, so incredibly crisp I can taste it. You are one hell of a writer.

[greenapricot]

Ohgodohgodohgod do that again.
I'll try. But, til I manage that, I did write a drabble and another ficlet while you were gone, that you might not have seen.

This is--perfect. This is how I want to write when I grow up. This is snarky and dissatisfied and so Draco, the power freak. And so sensual, so incredibly crisp I can taste it. You are one hell of a writer.
ah, heh. don'tknowwhattosaycauseIthinkyourwritingissupertooand... *toes floor* thisistoomuchpraise
thankyouthankyouthankyou

[longsunday]

Dude. I can say this rarely, but your writing is like, visibly/noticibly improving every time I read something - and, considering it wasn't shoddy to begin with, it's Pretty.Damn.Good. I particularly liked - well, the whole thing! - but the style here, and wordsruntogether like 'grinsneers' and 'shadowmovement' and stuff. *basks in the luxurious words* Lovely.

[greenapricot]

I can say this rarely, but your writing is like, visibly/noticibly improving every time I read something
*bounces* 'Cause I've always considered the whole fanfic writing thing a sort of practice, like a writing exercise or something, and it's really hard to tell from inside my own head if it's working or not so, yeah, really really good to know. thankyouthankyou

but the style here, and wordsruntogether
w00t. Again, with the whole I-can't-tell-myself-and-it's-good-to-hear thing. 'Cause, style, heh, sometimes I feel like I'm just writing a muddled bunch of what every other writer I read writes and not my own style, or something. yeah. And I just can't seem to help myself with the wordsruntogether, 'cause, well sometimes it's just the only thing that works, you know?

*basks in the luxurious praise*