down where it's wetter

Jan 11, 2011 13:38

((OOC: Explanation - as requested by Squad 19, this takes place in the Mermice universe.))

Once again, she lifted her head upwards, taking a good, firm look at where the sun was. )

minnie, mickey, disney, lionfish

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Aww, so dang cute! 19squad January 12 2011, 07:36:02 UTC
Aww, this was totally adorable! I loved it! :D You did amazing with this. First off, thank you so much for creating this from my random ideas. You didn't have to do it, but I really appreciate it, and I just love it! ^.^ I love how you made everything play out in this. The whole thing was beautiful, sweet, heartfelt, and romantic as well. And the ending with them being cute and playful with one another and him nipping her ear was too cute. I knew if you made a story from one of my random ideas that you could do it justice, and I was sure as heck right! ^.^ This was wonderful! Thank you so much for doing this, I really appreciate it. ^.^

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Glad you think so! green_tiara January 12 2011, 14:38:07 UTC
I have yet to fail a requester's prompt! o7

I'm just glad you enjoyed what I made out of all your great ideas, I couldn't have done it without you. Feel free to throw me any ideas, requests, anything at any time. Like fanfiction.net, you can send messages here too, called Private Messages, or just PM. Hover your mouse over the icon of the person you want to send a message too, and options should appear, then simply click 'send message', and the rest will be obvious.

You're very welcome, and thank you for requesting this. If I can make a reader of mine happy - especially one like you who writes great stories as well - than I've done my job well.

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Re: Glad you think so! 19squad January 13 2011, 07:53:33 UTC
Thank you very much! That really means a lot to me that you did this. I can't thank you enough.

Aw, thank you, that means a lot. I loved how you turned my random thoughts into a totally sweet and totally adorable story. Thank you very much! That really means a lot, and I would love to toss you ideas when I get them. Thanks so much for the offer! After reading this story, I did have one litte idea for another scene within this story, heh...

You're welcome. I'm glad you liked the ideas I had. Thank you very much, that really means a lot. That's a real compliment coming from you. But you're the better writer here. Well, you surpased well; you did fantastic with it, and I loved every bit of it! :D

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green_tiara January 13 2011, 14:55:21 UTC
geez, with all these thank yous and compliments, my ego is going to shoot through the roof! XD Heehee. Thank you.

one little idea? What was it?

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now I have Sebastian singing in my head XD sagibunu January 12 2011, 17:53:37 UTC
Wooo! Go Minnie! Kick some shark ass! lol *cough* ok sorry. I adore how this one shows how tough Minnie can really be, something we don't see very often. Girl's got spunk and fire within and isn't afraid to stand up to the bad guys and protect herself and her man if need be. I agree with 19squad, this was sweet, romantic and playful. I was totally gushing over the adorable banter between them and Minnie may deny it all she wants but we all know she likes it.

Thanks for sharing! ....*runs off to watch Little Mermaid and draw more mermice*

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up on the shore they work all day~ green_tiara January 12 2011, 18:03:14 UTC
I was tempted to end it earlier with just Mickey waking up, but I realized that Minnie so rarely gets to kick some booty, so I tossed in that extra scene. And banter is way too much fun to write, i swear I almost have it for every couple. Or maybe I'm just mean |D

You're welcome, and thanks for reading!

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