writing spring while being in winter

Dec 28, 2010 22:55

((OOC: Explanation - Before getting into this mice drabble, it's based off another 'verse, made in part thanks to good friend angie, but the verse is so small and simple that I didn't know it had enough for a story summary. Simply, Minnie moves into a humble village and learns about/meets a lone bachelor, Mickey, who lives all by himself in a huge ( Read more... )

garden, minnie, mickey, disney

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I've pretty much already said most of this already but I guess it wont hurt sagibunu December 29 2010, 06:14:39 UTC
That. Was. Absolutely. Adorable.

reading the summary and the first few paragraphs I felt very sorry for Mickey. I get that he's content to be alone with just his garden but even if he doesn't want to admit it to himself deep down I get the feeling he's rather lonely. I love how he doesn't quite know what to do with Minnie, the situation that has presented itself to him and how he's unaware of the feelings that have begun to form in his heart of the sudden happiness he's getting from this silly little girl who has snuck into his garden and his heart. and Minnie! Just when I think she can't get any cuter then She's speed talking and saying things like "your name is Michael Michael Mouse?" and I just want to hug her and again the age difference really does fit here in this 'verse.

I really enjoyed reading this and I look forward to anything else you write for this 'verse (I just love all your stories, each one is like opening a brand new book I love it~!) Thanks for sharing.

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always a good reminder =P green_tiara December 29 2010, 14:38:40 UTC
I tried to form a difference between 'content' and 'happiness', because sometimes there really is a difference between the two. Alas, Mick here doesn't quite understand it, but she's sure to help. As for her, I tried to make her as completely opposite this version's Mick as I could, just to confound him all the more. It really was run writing this, I like this humble little verse - no magic, no huge drama, just a simple falling love, slice of life, day by day romance. You're welcome, and thanks for reading!

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