Oh, this is just lovely. I've always been a little fascinated by Jo/Adam, and this was written beautifully. I love how you demonstrate her newness to the job, where every death is still a shock, as opposed to Adam's view, where he's looking at the bigger picture.
The phone blinks red light in the centre of the table, the dot blurred by the tears she won’t let fall. This line was just gorgeous. Great work!
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The phone blinks red light in the centre of the table, the dot blurred by the tears she won’t let fall.
This line was just gorgeous. Great work!
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My favourite line also. This is wonderfully sparse and gentle. And makes me sad. :(
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