Comments | greatestfate: He's got the whole world in his hands

greatestfate

He's got the whole world in his hands

Jan 18, 2009 14:25

Title: He's Got The Whole World In His Hands
Author: greatestfate
Pairing: Junes
Dedication: To evolia, for her wanting Junes, and all the little prompts that have fueled this. This is for you. ♥ I hope you enjoy it.
Author's Note: This is probably going to be a little series (an evolia series!) of Junes that don't really all connect, but are somewhat all related. It will ( Read more... )

s/a, junes, mcfly

Comments 8

evolia January 18 2009, 20:49:21 UTC

Most striking here, to me, are the touches. I don't think Danny would ever have gone away, even if Harry never was ready, because in the end, it's them, their touches and the way they are with each other. I like them as a secret, because it's easier for them not to be overwhelmed by what the world thinks if it's just the two of them (the four of them). They're, somewhat, so fragile in their relationship. The love is strong, the bond is sometimes very brittle.

Anyway, I'm going on a tangent, here.But this was very lovely. Really strong feelings, words that don't need to be spoken. It's the precious moments before it kind of gets out of their hands.

greatestfate January 19 2009, 23:38:57 UTC

You really captured it the way I wanted it to come across. That Danny wouldn't stop trying, wouldn't leave Harry's side even if he wasn't ready. But I wanted Harry to be ready in the end, I wanted Danny to have that moment of happiness.

I'm so glad you've enjoyed it. :) Thank you.

lambofcurl101th January 18 2009, 23:40:40 UTC

Oh, oh. Oh. Just. oh.
I've fallen in love with Junes all over again. Hard.
Because this was so precious and sweet, just them being completely for each other.
And Danny wanting so badly for everyone to know that Harry is his, that he feels so amazing because of it and has exactly the one thing he always wanted and needs.
And Harry scared to ruin anything and possibly hurt anyone (mostly Danny, then himself) but still, in the end, urged to just let what is come out, like it has to for them to be completely happy and unbothered by the rest of everything.

Show the world that he was on top of it and was holding his world in his arms.

That is the most beautiful line, I think, ever.

greatestfate January 19 2009, 23:40:32 UTC

Oh! I am so glad you've fallen back in love with Junes!!! I love that pairing so hard. XD

Oh, you understand all of this so perfectly, thank you! ♥

*blushes* Your flattery, it slays me. Thank you!

mamia94 January 19 2009, 01:24:32 UTC

*cheers*
whoo!

greatestfate January 19 2009, 23:40:46 UTC

Haha, thanks. :)

call999 January 19 2009, 01:41:26 UTC

Fantastic fluff! It's so sweet and adorable and man, real, you crafted them so well. On a serious note, this feels like a sad problem amongst gays in general :( but I'm glad for the awesomely happy ending!

Oh I need to make myself a Junes icon...

greatestfate January 19 2009, 23:42:01 UTC

I'm glad you think I've captured them. I try my best but sometimes I feel like I just don't get it. Thank you!!
I think it is an issue as well, and I wish no one ever had to feel that way, wish no one felt like they were a disgrace because of who they love.

You really, really do!!