Fanfic: Loki/Magneto - The Unwanted

[greatbriton]

bah. Here's Chapter 1 of the fic that is driving me insane. Hopefully now that I've finished this part I can move on quickly with the rest. And hopefully it doesn't suck major ass. :D

Title: The Unwanted
Summary: Loki let's go of Thor to fall through the opening they had ripped in space to find himself not only on Earth but thrown back in time

Comments

[zed_pm]

AHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHH THIS IS AMAZING. I CANNOT WAIT FOR MORE. AHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHH

[greatbriton]

YAY!!!! :D :D :D

(you can totally yell at me if I get Loki's voice wrong, I would appreciate criticism with what you think if you actually think it's off or anything. Your loki input is very important to me! hehe)

[zed_pm]

:DDDD

That is like the best compliment ever. <3<3 I love his voice here because it's a nice mix of movie and comic Loki.

[greatbriton]

awww, good. That's kind of how he exists in my mind. lol

[anonymous]

SOOO GOOD! KEEP IT UP!