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Challenge 308 : Microfic

Aug 03, 2014 11:33

Author: avirra
Fandom: Star Trek TOS
Characters: James T. Kirk, Spock, Montgomery Scott, Leonard McCoy
Rating: G
Warnings: none
Words: 11

"Everyone alright?"

"Affirmative, Captain."

"Aye, sir."

"Lieutenant Morris?"

"He's dead, Jim."

character: original, fandom: star trek tos, rating: g, character: spock, character: leonard "bones" mccoy, character: james t kirk, challenge 308, character: montgomery scott, author: avirra

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avirra August 3 2014, 19:18:47 UTC

Thank you - I managed to squeeze in more characters than I thought I could in 11 words :)

goldvermilion87 August 3 2014, 19:28:04 UTC

Firstly: Awesome!

Secondly: Which tag do you need?

avirra August 3 2014, 19:30:43 UTC

First - Thank you *g*.

Second - I need an author tag.

goldvermilion87 August 4 2014, 03:59:48 UTC

You have an author tag. :)

avirra August 4 2014, 11:43:18 UTC

Thank you!

litlover12 August 9 2014, 20:32:14 UTC

He never should've put on that red shirt. :-) Good job!

avirra August 9 2014, 20:38:35 UTC

Thank you. Scotty seems the only one immune to the red shirt curse. Perhaps his alcohol content has something to do with that. :)

med_cat August 10 2014, 19:53:05 UTC

Love this! So IC, so Star Trek in a nutshell ;)

avirra August 11 2014, 06:10:14 UTC

Many thanks - I knew when I started what three of the eleven words would be *l*. Even non-Trek fans seem to know 'He's dead. Jim.'

med_cat August 11 2014, 08:32:37 UTC

You're most welcome and yes, absolutely ;)