Comments | gravi_girl123: Supernatural: Slash Sam/Dean: R: If I Were a Color

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Supernatural: Slash Sam/Dean: R: If I Were a Color

Oct 25, 2005 01:11

It's 1:11 AM I doubt anyone will be up to read this. I'm torn between loving this fic and disliking it. It's probably just the whole 1 AM thing talking ( Read more... )

sam/dean, supernatural, slash

Comments 41

shadowcat15 October 25 2005, 05:43:04 UTC

Sam's mind is a weird place. This was definetly confusing.

Where is it 1:11? It's only 10:41 here.

gravi_girl123 October 25 2005, 14:40:03 UTC

When I first started writing this, it was not this weird, but then as I went along and thought about it, I wanted to try something different. Something weirder. I mean, I wanted to find something different going on inside Sam's head.

I'm in Pennsylvania, when I posted it it was 1:11. I heart different time zones, or else I would have woken up to like zero feedback.

nothinwrongwme October 25 2005, 05:51:14 UTC

I almost died when I read this. Not only because it's good (it is) but because when I was little I used to think "If I were a color, what color would I be?" all the time. I never put it in the context of a mood ring, but I always thought it. I can't remember when I stopped. That was the creepiest thing ever, to read that.

gravi_girl123 October 25 2005, 14:42:01 UTC

That *is* weird, yet awesome that it could jump out to you in that way. I added the mood ring thing in because it just seemed like something Sam would have been introduced to at some point. I don't know, just *shrugs* that's me.

Glad you thought this was good, I think it's going to be a fic that either leaves you going "wtf?" (well maybe, see no matter how many times I read it, I get it, even when I put myself in the readers mind) or "Dude. Word."

Thank you!

carlofreak4life October 27 2005, 14:39:50 UTC

OMG i'm in love with your avatar. it's bloddy awesome.

nothinwrongwme October 27 2005, 16:23:57 UTC

It's by carmendove. I love it too. :)

grey853 October 25 2005, 13:24:58 UTC

I like Sam's confusion. After "Skin" and hearing all that shit from the shapeshifter, it'd be enough to freak someone out. And I can see where he'd be uncomfortable and feeling guilty about being a freak who's in love with his brother on top of hunting down monsters.

gravi_girl123 October 25 2005, 14:44:31 UTC

Exactly, and Sam's mind was already reeling from enough things as it was without the shape-shiter putting all that other stuff in his mind.

Fanon!Sam has got to be one of the most guilty people like ever.

grey853 October 25 2005, 14:50:13 UTC

I'd say he was pretty guilt-ridden in canon as well. That, of course, makes him all the more fun to mess with in fiction.

gravi_girl123 October 25 2005, 14:58:16 UTC

Haha, yes, in canon he definitely is, but in fanon, with the added guilt of loving Dean in more ways then one...it's almost as though he's...OH MY GOD! Adoption fic where Sam is Jewish! Hee, he could be one of my people *snerk.*

staceey October 25 2005, 13:45:34 UTC

I liked it. Bit strange but so are the brothers. *lol* So its perfect. Great job.

gravi_girl123 October 25 2005, 14:45:25 UTC

Bit strange but so are the brothers. haha true true.

So its perfect. aw! Glad you thought so, thank you very much!

wistful_fever October 25 2005, 14:23:27 UTC

This has depth. I liked that you picked a theme and ran with it---it really held the story together, and gave it that something extra that pushed it beyond A happens so B happens then C. Having Sam talk to people in his mind, Sam's shark smile, the "You used to let me fuck you like that", and Dean kissing Sam in public are all things that stand out to me as really, REALLY good. :)

gravi_girl123 October 25 2005, 14:56:38 UTC

Dude. You saw the theme thing? I'm so glad. I really wanted to have a bunch of small running themes sort of come together in the end. I really don't know why I liked the idea of Sam speaking to people in his mind, probably because he seems to be really torn up abut never being able to tell anyone the truth. I used that as his outlet, sadly, it didn't quite work, though.

Am really happy you liked this, this means a lot. Thank you <3

And wow, as a sidenote, I'm starting to think more and more that I'm your split personality or our brains are cheating on each other, because your video and my fic were both different, which is so not a bad thing in your videos case because it made my night like woah. And later I promise to leave a better comment over on your journal. Am still trying to process and think of some well-constructed feedback. We all know that won't work out.