Lost; Thursday Morning; Sawyer/Jack, Sawyer/Kate, Jack/Kate

[gravi_girl123]

Fandom: Lost

Comments

[eponine119]

God, this was good. I love the way you've expanded that future world. I can picture it all as surely as if it had been telecast.

In some ways Sawyer was the closest to Kate that Jack could let himself come.

That's great. As is the almost-circular ending, Sawyer finding himself alone, but not really this time.

[gravi_girl123]

Oh, thank you! I was quite nervous about posting this since I hadn't written fic in some time, but since the end of season 3 I'd been dying to play with that glimpse into the future they'd shown us! So glad you liked it <3

[elise_509]

This is really fantastic, one of the best post-S3 fics I've read so far. You did an amazing job! :)

[gravi_girl123]

Thank you so much!

[crickets]

Holy smokes! This was wonderful! I loved this take on their post-island lives. How things got to be where they are, Sawyer and Kate and how Jack loves them both. It's just wonderful.

Sawyer can tell that she’s itching to get out of her skin, itching to get out of the structure of time and days and lines and traffic and waiting, and maybe that’s when Sawyer started to see that while they’d once suited each other beautifully, suddenly in this life they did not.

I loved that bit. So sad. So well-put.

In the end he realized that the people he’d been with had meant more to him than a whole lifetime worth of people back home.

*clutches heart* Oh, Sawyer!

“We all want to go home, Kate. That aint nothing new.”

This line floored me! Him calling it "home." So simple and yet so powerful.

In some ways Sawyer was the closest to Kate that Jack could let himself come.

Wow that was just again, very powerful. Such a way with words.

He never would have guessed that when Jack Shepard touched him he would come so undone. Two lifetimes ago he

[gravi_girl123]

It's such a wonderful feeling to open up my email and see a response like this. Thank you so much for sharing which lines you liked most and for giving such lovely feedback <3

[maeby_surely]

I think this is the best tie-in with the finale that I've read yet. Fantastic job!

[gravi_girl123]

Oh my! Thank you!

[zelda_zee]

Loved this, especially the ending, which was wonderfully vivid and just perfect.

You know, I have a fic of yours from a couple years ago in my Memories. I didn't think you wrote Lost fic anymore. I would be thrilled if there was more to come.