[fic] alles was zaehlt { boarding [deniz/roman. r. 800 words.]
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[roman.deniz. r. 800 words.]
notes; from the dero prompt table.
warnings; none.
summary; didn't think it much like you to admire a man for keeping his legs together.
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[roman.deniz. r. 800 words.]
notes; from the dero prompt table.
warnings; none.
summary; didn't think it much like you to admire a man for keeping his legs together.
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*scrapes together some coherency for a proper comment*
Wow, I love what you've done here. It's just this one image all the way through, but it's so intense and tangible and your descriptions are just gorgeous - I can see every little touch, every deliberate motion. To start with, I love the image itself - Roman wrapped all around Deniz and sliding his hands into secret places, and Deniz being all breathless and eager for more yet never looking away from the skaters. The tension is AWESOME. And you've got their characterizations down so well - Roman being all smirky and in control but also not because he's so addicted and remembering things, and Deniz just completely at his mercy. Have I said GUH? And then you end it THERE! DAMN YOU, WOMAN.
I love this!!!
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This is just a lovely lovely comment LET ME PICK IT UP AND CUDDLE IT FOR A BIT, K? :DDD
And you've got their characterizations down so well I LIKE IT WHEN YOU SAY THAT because I never ever feel like I have written them properly. I have this tendency to go "pfft" and just write them however I want to (usually over-the-top and therefore OOC) and so YEHHHHH THEY'RE REALLY IN CHARACTER? THEY'RE REALLY REALLY IN CHARACTER? O BAAAABES YOU'VE MADE MY DAY<33333333
And then you end it THERE! DAMN YOU, WOMAN. Buahahahhaha :DDDD Me? Evil? Never!
*LOVES AND TWIRLS*
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JUST S;LJFSLJFDKLSFLFKSJDKLS
You are TORTUROUS! I'm a hot mess right now. I CAN NOT COMMENT COHERENTLY. I just--ROMAN is evil and you are evil and I feel like poor Deniz, being tortured and teased and left wanting more. DAMN YOU, WOMAN.
*LOVES SO HARD*
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Hahahaa, how happy am I that I left you a quivering mess? I'll give you a hint: VERY. ASDFDEBUVBFRDBVFRUVBUFDIV :DDDDD But still BFUDSIBFURBGFRSBFDS I can torture and tease you some more if you so wish. IDK how, BUT STILL, IT CAN HAPPEN. I shall hold it over your head as a threat for the next bajillion years. OR SOMETHING. IDK. SHELLY.
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Seriously, this was amazing, sensual and dark at the same time. The "What are his hands, doing, Deniz?" and Deniz being completely out of it and too distracted to formulate a response immediately cracked me up because man, he's watching the skaters, but he's certainly not seeing them in that moment.
I am oddly not against seeing Lars teach Deniz a similar lesson. Although hell, at this point I'm pretty much in favor of anyone male being the one to teach Deniz such a lesson because the skirt-chasing is really very old.
I have to say, the most sensual thing to me wasn't even the blatant almost-handjob part, but Roman stroking his thumb in those increasingly large circles by his hipbone, both of them so restrained in emotion & response because of the situation. Then it's beautifully contrasted with the memory of when Roman didn't have to consider such touches a luxury and Deniz was more responsive and open. It's gorgeous. <3 ( ... )
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And ADESYJGFYUDIFUDS <33333 That whole comment is lovely and I am so so happy that you think it's "sensual" because that was what I was going for before the fic took on a life of its own and decided that YES YES IT WAS GOING TO BE PORN-WITHOUT-THE-PORN. Hahahaha. But eeeee, omg, thankyou so much for the gorgeous comment and for actually, you know, liking it and YES, just yes.
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o, and: I'm happy my post reminded you of your prompt table. I was just taking a look at it and I'm definitely interested in seeing how you'll respond to some of those. hahahaha I am very interested in how I'll respond to some of them too. I don't even ( ... )
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Oh, love, the detail in this is just gorgeous -- incredible sensual with the image of Roman's thumb on a slip of skin and Roman just folded around him, and you know that all that fleece between them must be heated up to about 45 degrees. Kinda like I'm feeling right now, as a matter of fact!
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Yay, I am so happy you like it :DDD And ahaha I love the fact you thought it was hot because DEAR GOD that was what I was trying to write and I was flailing and panicking that it wasn't working or it was too OTT or that it just wouldn't come out right but apparently it did and YAY AND THANKS AND CHEERS AND DANKE AND DDIOLCH.
*TWIRLS AND LOVES*
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