Keepin Up Appearances --3

Jul 22, 2008 11:54



Title:   Keepin Up Appearances:  Chapter 3

Author:  Isabelle (sophieernie)

Rating: will be NC-17 (we get pretty close this time)

Disclaimer: Not mine, no profit, all hail AP, LM, DO, etc.

Genre:  AU/AU? --  Circa 1980.

Chapter 3

FYI:  As with most stuff I write, my fingers and the keyboard tend to conspire against me.  It just sorta pours our of my head ( Read more... )

keepin up appearances, sophieernie, nc-17

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boo_boo_cat July 22 2008, 17:59:40 UTC
Fishing buddies huh?! Can't wait for the next chapter!!

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aileenfan July 22 2008, 18:16:44 UTC
WOW, that was something:) Can't wait for the next chapter!!!

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camillar July 22 2008, 19:47:20 UTC
Oh I cannot wait for their trip to the cabin :) *jumping up and down in excitement* Thanks for such a great story! I'm really loving it. Oh and LOL about cedar fever, I live in San Antonio, it's really bad down here!
Camilla

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grapesmugglers July 22 2008, 20:02:01 UTC
Wow, I live in San Antonio, too! Small, small world.

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camillar July 22 2008, 21:17:49 UTC
How cool is that! We're like neighbors or something :)
Camilla

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elena_62 July 22 2008, 20:20:30 UTC
Dear Isabelle,

I'm glad that the situation progressed so quickly. Thank you for avoiding a cliff hanger! Now I can wait happily for the weekend in Palo Duro (you choosing the name deliberately?).

I like especially your Jack: clever, with the move when they are wrestling, and bold and tender feeling already the need to protect Ennis.

I hope the final nod to canon doesn't have any long terms implications (let's say a four *days* separation would be ok, not more ;-)).

Thank you for writing!

Antonella

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bagel1 July 22 2008, 20:23:59 UTC
Hi Isabelle ( ... )

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bbm_lover July 23 2008, 13:31:35 UTC
Hey Isabelle,
Wonderful update. Love how you delve into J&E's thoughts and show how they're already feel something. Great how you take scenes from the OS and turn it around. Jack is bold taking a chance on Ennis, asking him to go fishing with him. Cant wait to read what happens then. Thanks for writing this enjoyable story.
Jess

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