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Nov 03, 2011 21:00


Title: Cigarettes (for the 100 Infinite Fic Challenge)Rating: PG
Pairing: Dongwoo/Woohyun
Genre: Tragedy...?
Summary: High School!AU - The scent of cigarettes would always remind Dongwoo of him.
Length: 1,395 words

Nam Woohyun was the embodiment of everything Jang Dongwoo disliked in a person. )

pairing: dongwoo/woohyun, challenge

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pockysunshine November 20 2011, 23:33:16 UTC
I cried. I love how you started with "...things that jang dongwoo disliked" and ended with "...things that dongwoo loved."
"Fancy meeting you here sunbae" SQUEALS FOREVER KDJFGHKGFJN
I was really touched by this..I kind of cried at the end because I understand Dongwoo's loss...but my god I'm so sad.
well-written though! ...but still sad :(
and it even had a bigger impact on me because 2woo is my secret otp and ugh SO MANY FEELINGS RN I CAN'T
KUDOS TO YOU!!!

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grapefruitade November 21 2011, 02:49:28 UTC
Aw, I'm sorry I made you cry. /hands you boxes of tissues
I'm happy that you enjoyed my writing though and I'm glad you noticed my (not-so-subtle, LOL) parallelism.
2Woo is your secret OTP? Gasp. I approve of your secret, rare-pair shipping, hahaha c:
Thank you for reading!

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countrymir November 21 2011, 02:10:04 UTC
aww this was lovely. i had not expected this at all, how this ended up turning out at all. very sad and just ;-; sigh

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grapefruitade November 21 2011, 02:51:14 UTC
Ah, yeah, I was a bit torn as to whether I should have ended it on a happier note or not... But then the realist side in me won out and alsdkjfhsdf Woohyun ;n;
Thank you for reading though~

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innocently_hot November 21 2011, 04:07:07 UTC
oh god, it's been a while since i cried because of a fanfic. damn, this is so sad but it's so beautifully written and i love and hate you all the same time. i normally avoid death fic and i will stop halfway through before the dying part but somehow i just couldn't stop reading this fic. gah, now i'm crying a river~ T__T

thank you for sharing this with us all. i hope to read more from you in the future~

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grapefruitade November 22 2011, 03:00:45 UTC
Aw, I'm sorry for making you hate me (and love me at the same time) ^^;;;;
/hands you a handkerchief
I'm so touched that you think this was beautifully written, because I personally think there are so many flaws, hahaha... Thank you for taking the chance to read this even though you normally avoid death!fic.

Thank you for reading and commenting!

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grapefruitade November 23 2011, 02:50:14 UTC
Oh, hello, you~

I had actually been afraid that I had shifted the tone of the fic too early, so to hear that it was impactful like that lessens my doubts a little; and I'm flattered you think I "spun it into something gorgeous," because there's just something about this fic that keeps on bugging me /my creys

Fine Woohyun is fine indeed~ Hahaha. I just feel like he'd be such a snarky hoobae, but a damn attractive one.
(NGL, I just wanted to have him call Dongwoo "sunbae" which is why I snuck that in there)kinks ahoy!

Thank you for your comment. You're much too kind. Muchmuchmuch too kind.
♥♥♥

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grapefruitade November 30 2011, 05:08:17 UTC
Your comment made me giggle. And I rarely giggle.
Honestly, I can't write angst for the life of me, hahaha. Better to leave that to writers who can write angst without making it too melodramatic XD

And I see what you did there. Geez. Go away. Except don't. Ahuuhuu ;u;
You're much too nice, good sir, but thank you for taking the time to read and comment \O/

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