Maybe It Was The Chocolate - Reita x Kai

[grapefruit_jely]

Title: Maybe It Was The Chocolate
Author: grapfruit_jely
Band: The GazettE
Pairing: ReitaxKai
Rating: Okay for everyone :D
Theme: #13 - Last piece of cake - 15memories
Summary: "Perhaps that was what went wrong. They had fallen too fast; they had been too blinded by the sweetness, it was too overpowering, covering up for all the little faults in their relationship

Comments

[gazerotica]

Sweet and sad! awh!
liked it - liked how it flowed.

[grapefruit_jely]

Yeah, well I had intended to write like a super angsty fic & when I actually started writing it, it wasn't really. So I was like, okay start the sadness NOW. :P

Thank you.♥

[scottskydweller]

i love the way you have used the analogy here.
it is kinda intriguing and though sad, beautifully written.
keep the creative juices flowing!!!

[grapefruit_jely]

Thank you!
I wasn't sure if it would be weird to use the love vs. cake thing, but I was like mayyyybe it won't sound too dumb so I went with it. ^^;;

[bauci]

You totally suck for making me weepy almost every time I read something of yours...
♥
pretty.

[grapefruit_jely]

Aww, sorry!! D:

Thank you tho.♥

[grapefruit_jely]

OMG REALLY?! :DDD Well I always think my style makes everything sound strangely awkward, so you're comment makes me very happy, I must say.

Haha. XD I haven't even chocolate cake for so long it's kind of depressing...

[route337]

ghkdjdkdn I WANT CHOCOLATE CAKE. ;_;

but yeah, this was amazing. <3

[grapefruit_jely]

Meeee two. Chocolate cake is quite nummy.

Thank you! :D