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When Words Fail - Part 5

Mar 11, 2009 22:24

Title: When Words Fail
Author: grapefrtuit_jely
Part: 5/5
Rating: Okay for everyone
Genre: Romance/angst
Pairing: ReitaxKai
Summary: “Sitting on the grass, the two watched the sun slowly disappear below the horizon, and Kai could have sworn that he was watching their relationship.”

( They warmed his insides. )

reitaxkai, fic, the gazette

Comments 17

kawasakininja March 14 2009, 21:46:45 UTC

I think this could be the first breakup story I've read, first break up series for certain. I'm little bit surprised because people usually write series for the sake of people getting together or together with someone else. But it isn't like I didn't see this coming. I liked it. Although they broke up it seemed like the best possible ending. Because sometimes that is the best thing to do. I liked the comparison with the sunset, Kai's thoughts, how words failed them again and how there seemed to be just lack of communication and understanding of each other. It was very nicely written.

grapefruit_jely March 17 2009, 04:41:50 UTC

:) Thank yoooou.

museelo March 15 2009, 14:30:00 UTC

Even f you came back to life, I will kill you e____e
You had no right to make them break up è_é
Just kidding xD
This little fic was cool ='3 Somehow, I was just hypnotized by the words and I could almost feel Kai's sadness...

Thanks a lot for this fiction ^^
Bye =3

grapefruit_jely March 17 2009, 04:42:49 UTC

o____o
Awww, 'I was hypnotized by the words' that's such a nice compliment. :) Thank you.

k435y March 17 2009, 08:22:44 UTC

Huh, I knew I commented on this fic once. And then I just lost my way. LOL. Anyway, the ending was beautifully yet heart-breaking. But it was sweet of Reita to choose a somewhat calming setting for the end of their relationship. Gosh, my heart is breaking now. =( Why, Reita, why? What's so...not loveable about Kai?! Don't mind me...it's early in the dawning morning. LOL. Thank you for sharing!

grapefruit_jely March 19 2009, 03:43:17 UTC

Haha, well, I'm very glad that you re-found it. ;)
Yeah...there's something just so romantically sad about sunsets to me.
No no, thank you for reading!

lisis_miyu September 26 2009, 19:39:24 UTC

Your fics are always so tragic and real that I love it!
Wonderful, and I don´t know if want to give some to learn but you do
Congratulations honey, I even hope that some day you make a happy ending, but in a way you always did, because the best form to end happy is being honest
Keep working! well done
Chuuuuuu
By the way I REALLY love this pair to, I even think that they have some in the real life jajajajajaja DUDE! *¬*