You Remind Me (Chapter 3)

[granity20]

Title:          You Remind Me

Pairing:     Ryoda, Akame, Tanaka and a few others on the sidelines

Rating:      PG 13 ( I guess.)

Genre:       Romance ( not to sure as to what genre this fic will be in except for what I've stated)

Summary:  Ueda Tatsuya confessed to his crush Nishikido Ryo but it seems that the latter loathes him for a lot of reasons.

Comments

[sanox]

OMG!!!!!!!!!!
Ryo, i'm going to kick your but and send you of to fly into the ocean!!!!!
He is evil!!!!!!!!!
But i like this chapter very much!!!!!! XD
Thank you very much for posting this *bow* (.^____^.)

[granity20]

dear thank you again for reading this one!!!!

i really hope i'll not mess up this fic...*sigh*

[tokoyam1]

R~Y~O...

you really...

aargghtt...

please update soon..
and thank you~

[granity20]

i could give you a hand if you want too????^_^
he's really a $=&%$ here right?*tsk**tsk**tsk*
bad ryo!!!-_-

[tokoyam1]

oowh..
thank you for helping me..
i cant find a good word to explain my feeling..
the point is "bad ryo".
wkwkkwwkk..

please update soon~

[granity20]

i'll update as soon as i can!!thanks you!!!^_^

[erikaoi]

Bit short but ok.ryo such an ass.poor ueda.more

[granity20]

really this was short?this was supposed to be a 5 pages chapter.i cut it thinking that having 5pages in one chapter is too long...

[erikaoi]

yeah,sorry.i think its ok to have long page in one chapter so that u can explore&be more deskriptif but not dragging it if u know what I mean.it wont be bored to readers if u write nice one..so goodluck one next chapter.

[erikaoi]

yes it is for me.sorry.is ok to write long page in one chapter,u can explore more and be more descriptive but not dragging it just to make it long if u know what I mean.gambare on next chapter.

[granity20]

wow, i didn't expect you'll be thinking about this fic!^_^
it warms my heart knowing that!!!^_^

thank you so much!!!

[shigefan1992]

Ryo...why are you such a jerk?
jeez I'm feeling for Ueda now, Although that line: So I’m now a friend of yours Ryo somehow I could totally picture Ueda sitting perfectly poised, arching a pretty eyebrow and come out with the remark.

Anyway it was a good chapter, hmmmm the only thin I would suggest is maybe proof reading it a bit, there were some sentances in the beginning that were worded strangely and kinda confused me.
Still I really liked it =D

[granity20]

ahh..really???thanks for telling me!!!

and thanks for reading and commenting!!!^_^