When the Sakura Falls - AoixUruha - 2/?

[granitemouth]

Title: When the Sakura Falls
Chapters: 2/?
Author: granitemouth 
Band: the GazettE
Genre: AU, angst (romance at later events)
Warnings: nothing violent as of the moment.
Rating: PG-13
Pairings/Characters: AoixUruha (some pairing revealed at other chapters)
Synopsis: Uruha is the perfect student, with a perfect world and the perfect image. But when the new student

Comments

[crown_halo]

Looks like Aoi really got under Uruha's skin XD
D: Uru's parents sound so strictttt. I would die if my parents expected that of me >.>"

[granitemouth]

Yes, and I was getting a little scared of him when I was writing those cynical thoughts (I know, I'm weird) of his.

I think I'll leave the house if my parents are like this. ormf.

[moixmao]

all he needs is somebody who will take care of him
poor uruha D:

great job on this one
and next chapter please :DDD

[granitemouth]

*hugs*
domo my dear~

hai hai~
If only that black out would not happen then I'm willing to write the next chapter. ormf.

[niseimono]

I really like this..
Poor Uruha for having to pretend that everything is ok.and it scares me to see how strict his parents esp his father towards him.Sometimes,parents just didnt understands their child>_<..too much expectation

cant wait for the updates^^

[granitemouth]

Yep. Believe me, I was hating his parents already while writing this. ^^

thanks!

[shuuha]

i do wonder how this story would be written if it was done in 3rd person POV? just a thought.

i liked uru's interaction with his family, the way his thoughts run whenever they speak to him. in many ways i relate to this character of uruha you've created: pessimistic, resigned, and yet still frustrated about life. i look forward to aoi's own sentiments, especially because this is from uru's POV.

just to add, i believe sakuras can be taken as simply sakura because in japanese, singularly or collectively, we use the same word.

[granitemouth]

That would be pretty brain-bleeding my dear. I'm really bad at 3rd person POV. I swear.

WAH! Thanks for saying that, sakuras did seem sort of awkward but I used it anyway because I don't know. Thanks for noting that! I'll edit it now!

*hugs*

[grapefruit_jely]

OMG you're writting is amazing?
Yes, very much so. :D
I like this so far.
Keep going dear!

[granitemouth]

thank you!
^^V