Minho x Onew - One foot forward - oneshot

[granitemouth]

Title: One Foot Forward
Author: granitemouth
Pairing: Minho x Onew
Genre: fluff (bit of angst scattered)
Rating: g
Summary: Maybe all Jinki needed was for someone to push him to take that risk, somebody like him who would promise him of his security, and also of the baby’s.
Note: It's too sad that HB is over now, but I actually wrote the first draft of

Comments

[paranoiascreams]

i swear im born to steal spots.

and i will be back here soon. ^_^

spot XD

[ex_argh]

^^; *excited*

Re: spot XD

[ex_argh]

awwww XDDD that's so cute ;___; ♥
(idk why do cute things make me react with ";__;" but it does XDDD)

ahaha aww Jinki is so precious ;_; and Minho always seems so caring to him in HB~ and I really loved this~ it was so sweet and cute ^-^ all of Minho's observations~ :D
♥♥♥

Re: spot XD

[granitemouth]

I've always had this speculation in the beginning of HB that Jinki's afraid of holding Yoogeun because he might drop him or get the kid hurt because of his own 'condition'. And I guess I was close enough, when Jinki confirmed that he's afraid of carrying kids or animals because he might drop them. A trauma from childhood.

T___T
Aww Jinki~

Yes, yes, it seems that Minho's always so gentle when it comes to Jinki, doesn't he? ^^ Thanks for reading! ^^

Re: spot XD

[ex_argh]

yeah so did I! :D I always thought the same way you did too! ^^;; poor Jinki ♥

yeah ^^ to me it always looks like Minho is fussing over him in HB? XDD Like when he fell over in ep8(?) and Minho was helping him up and like holding him and stuff? *fails at explaining* :/

they're too cute together ♥ and your fic was so precious :DDD
thanks for writing~ ♥
(and you know I was sitting here thinking T___T NO ONE POSTS TOFUHO ANYMORE!! And then you posted XDDDD) ♥

[miss_circle]

Huaaaah I love all your fics! And this is so sweet. I love how it's so simple and quiet. We don't need anymore excessive question marks and exclamation points in this comm LOL

I love it <3

[granitemouth]

;_____________; I'm so happy you liked it because I was just so happy reading yours last night. >w<

Anyway, thanks for reading! ^^v

[miss_circle]

Really? Which one did you read? XD *happy*

Oh I always read your fics! Thus, I want to apologize if there are times I'm just being a silent reader >.<

I've always wanted to write another fic like yours, simple and quiet. But it looks like I have lost my touch :(

Keep writing! I love 'em! ^^

[granitemouth]

Oh it was The Lingering Misery. My gosh, that fic just broke my heart before I drifted to sleep. ;_______; And also the drabbles before that. ^^ And other works of yours.

So no need to apologize! I usually comment on a fic if ever I read them online, but most of the time I read them through my phone so I guess you can say I'm a silent reader, too? >D I try to get back on the page whenever I can to drop a message or two. Or just to flail happiness, mainly. >DDDD

I think your works are exactly simple and quiet, as well. And I love them. :DDD

Keep writing too! Hwaiting to us! XD

[volatileflame]

cute X3

[granitemouth]

Thank you~ ^^

[xxqod]

It's really so cute. ^^
hehe. Jinki's interaction with Yoogeunnie made progress throughout the HB episodes.
It's sad it has ended already.

hehe. TofuHo ^^
Minho is so demanding and childlike. somehow.

I love your writing style :)
Such a happy feeling ^^
<3 ~~

[granitemouth]

Yeah, I had wished again and again before every episode that Jinki will have a progress with the kid. Sometimes, I go pass the pairing radar to that appa-victory moment of Onew to Yoogeun X3 My cuteness gauge for Onew probably extended ten fold after HB.

I dearly miss HB now ):

You nailed Minho's personality well ^^

Glad you liked it!
Thanks for reading~