The Size of the Heart

Apr 19, 2008 22:31

 Title:  The Size of the Heart
Team Name:  Order of the Phoenix
Word Count:  100 x 2
Rating:  G
Challenge:  size matters
Characters:  Hermione, Severus, and their children, Alexander and Cassandra
A/N:  Not mine.  No money involved.  This is a continuation of "Promise You'll Hex Me," written for the When I'm Old and Grey challenge.  Severus and Hermione ( Read more... )

size matters challenge, m_mcgonagall_65

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droxy April 20 2008, 02:50:07 UTC
Awe....and all that the last line implies.

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m_mcgonagall_65 April 20 2008, 03:02:23 UTC
I'm proud of the last line because that's not how it started out. Hooray for editing! Thanks for reviewing, even if it is a last minute effort for the Order. ;-)

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sbrande April 20 2008, 03:21:32 UTC
Loved the last line particularly.

Well done, even if it is for the Order *GRUMBLES*

Love Sonia :)

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m_mcgonagall_65 April 20 2008, 11:17:45 UTC
Thanks for reviewing. I'm glad you enjoyed it--even if it is for the other team. :-)

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septentrion1970 April 20 2008, 07:07:21 UTC
That's very sweet.

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m_mcgonagall_65 April 20 2008, 11:19:26 UTC
Thanks for your review. It's not quite as sweet as "Promise You'll Hex Me," but I guess the last line does qualify as sweet. :-)

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talloakslady April 20 2008, 12:59:21 UTC
I liked that very much. Putting a Longbottom in made me smile--a great deal!

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m_mcgonagall_65 April 20 2008, 23:21:07 UTC
Thanks for your review. I always like a story with a Longbottom in it, too.

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duniazade April 20 2008, 13:50:42 UTC
Awww... that's so sweet. Great last line!

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m_mcgonagall_65 April 20 2008, 23:21:35 UTC
Thanks! I'm glad you liked it!

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