Payback in Hot Blood

Apr 13, 2008 21:50

Title: Payback in Hot Blood
Team Name: Death Eaters
Word Count: 100
Rating: PG-13
Challenge: compensation or payment
Characters: Hermione, Severus and another character
Author's Notes: Thanks to dacian_goddess for betaing this ficlet.
I want to dedicate it to ayerf because she let herself threatened convinced into remaining in the DE's team. I hope she won't mind ( Read more... )

compensation or payment challenge, septentrion1970

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septentrion1970 April 13 2008, 20:07:06 UTC
Thanks! I don't know what I was thinking...

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bluestocking79 April 13 2008, 20:15:25 UTC
~shivers~ Very creepy, but very well done!

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septentrion1970 April 14 2008, 06:15:21 UTC
Thanks. It was about time I wrote something other than fluff ;)

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septentrion1970 April 14 2008, 06:15:40 UTC
*bows head* Thanks.

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duniazade April 13 2008, 20:23:47 UTC
Wow! Very good! Evocative, creepy and powerful. Speak about vampire fic - this one is quite impressive in 100 words.

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septentrion1970 April 14 2008, 06:16:22 UTC
See how a LJ comment can turn out? I wonder if it brought out the best or the worst of me.

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duniazade April 14 2008, 15:45:25 UTC
The best of the worst...

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septentrion1970 April 14 2008, 15:52:58 UTC
LOL well said.

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ayerf April 13 2008, 20:25:15 UTC
Ooh, very dark and disturbing!

Nope, I certainly don't mind. I've convinced myself that the baby was already dead (she did say was hers, didn't she?). Good to see you writing again!

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septentrion1970 April 14 2008, 06:17:39 UTC
She says the baby was hers because she isn't the same Hermione, but in my mind, I assure you the baby is alive. I managed to disturb myself with this one.

I'm trying to get my groove back, but I wonder if it's a good thing ;)

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ayerf April 14 2008, 08:31:48 UTC
I think I'll go with little_beloved's vampire family theory...

It's a good thing! Especially when ambiguous enough for the reader to do a little interpretation of their own.

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