Backwards and in High Heels

Mar 04, 2008 11:14

Title: Backwards and in High Heels
Team: Spy for the Order
Characters: Severus/Hermione
Challenge: “Prove It” Challenge
Word Count: 100 x 9
Rating: PG-15
Warning: Gender-bending and (~winces~) implied mpreg. No, don’t run away!
Disclaimer: They’re not mine, they’re J.K. Rowling’s. Alas.
Notes: Um. This took a just slightly different turn ( Read more... )

bluestocking79, prove it! challenge

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septentrion1970 March 4 2008, 17:45:28 UTC
Oh, that was nice. People always expect to have the worst job in the world, but in this case it wasn't exactly true. and the consequences of the Polyjuiced sex... ROFL

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bluestocking79 March 4 2008, 18:47:04 UTC
Thank you! I'm so glad you enjoyed it. It's true: we always think other people have it better than we do.

As for the consequences... well, now I'm tempted to explore those a bit more.

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camillo1978 March 4 2008, 17:48:25 UTC
Love these! Wickedly funny. How did he give birth?!

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bluestocking79 March 4 2008, 18:49:18 UTC
Thank you! I'm glad you enjoyed them.

How did he give birth?!

A very good question! I'm thinking that there must be some kind of magical equivalent of a Caesarean, but if I write the sequel, I'll have to think about it more.

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camillo1978 March 4 2008, 18:53:35 UTC
I was wondering if he had to take polyjuice in order to get the baby out safely ;-)

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bluestocking79 March 4 2008, 19:01:29 UTC
I may use that idea yet, if you don't mind! :D

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demented_mei March 4 2008, 18:14:36 UTC
I think I died a little on the inside from laughing too hard. XD What are the chances of hearing more about Severus' pregnancy? *hinthint*

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bluestocking79 March 4 2008, 18:50:41 UTC
Thank you! I'm delighted to give you a laugh.

As for the chances of hearing about Severus' pregnancy, well, I'm considering it. I'll have to see if I can come up with anything.

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keladry_lupin March 4 2008, 18:24:37 UTC
I like how you brought it full circle, with Hermione massaging her aching feet -- which ache because of the high heels -- and then she massages his feet after his day in high heels. Nice details!

Polyjuiced sex can lead to some difficult situations. I'd really, REALLY like to see how they handle the mpreg situation, if your muse is friendly and obliging!

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bluestocking79 March 4 2008, 19:00:48 UTC
Thank you! I'm so pleased that you liked the full circle effect.

I'm always surprised that I don't see more fics dealing with the fallout from Polyjuiced sex, because it seems like it could be very awkward. As far as a continuation goes, I'm thinking about it. If the muse is agreeable, I'll write it!

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tudorpot March 4 2008, 19:13:47 UTC
Love it.

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bluestocking79 March 4 2008, 20:32:06 UTC
Thank you!

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