The Clowns

Feb 24, 2008 13:47

Title: The Clowns
Author: a_bees_buzzWord Count: 13x100 (though the first one won't earn points ( Read more... )

writing harlequin challenge, a_bees_buzz

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septentrion1970 February 24 2008, 19:43:53 UTC
Oh, that was dramatic.

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a_bees_buzz February 24 2008, 20:24:43 UTC
Yeah? I thought it got bogged down with trying to fit in all the elements of the plot. I'm glad you found it dramatic.

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queenp71 February 24 2008, 19:50:32 UTC
wow! Intense! Well done!

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a_bees_buzz February 24 2008, 20:25:45 UTC
Thank you. Lovely icon! I have a soft spot for penguins since I wrote a crack-fic about them.

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queenp71 February 24 2008, 21:09:01 UTC
I've got lots of penguin icons as I've been a fan of them since I was in 4th grade and we read Mr. Popper's Penguins in reading class. ;)

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kribu February 24 2008, 19:57:18 UTC
Not a very successful party overall, I'd say!

An interesting take. And points going to the Death Eaters certainly make sense.

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a_bees_buzz February 24 2008, 20:28:19 UTC
No, not the sort of party you really enjoy, what with the host and two of the guests ending up dead. But that's what you get with tragedies.

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ayerf February 24 2008, 20:38:15 UTC
If only Ron had kept his big mouth shut! If only Hermione never married Draco in the first place! If only-

*sigh* Such a tragic, powerful cluster. Full of 'if onlies'.

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a_bees_buzz February 24 2008, 20:41:36 UTC
It is one of the great tragic operas. I'm glad the sense of "if onlies" translated.

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duniazade February 24 2008, 20:45:12 UTC
Clever adaptation!

And Draco gets to be the badass this time.

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a_bees_buzz February 24 2008, 20:52:40 UTC
Inasmuch as a cuckolded husband can ever really be bad-ass!

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duniazade February 24 2008, 21:11:47 UTC
He didn't knew, but once he learned, the body count was impressive!

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a_bees_buzz February 24 2008, 21:26:30 UTC
Operas tend to be that way - lots of bodies all over the stage at the end. You don't get a lot of subtlety in most operas.

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