Warlock Light

[camillo1978]

Title: Warlock LightTeam: The Order

Comments

[melusin_79]

Very nice and well done Hermione for breaking the habit.

[camillo1978]

Hello there.

She's a better girl than me ;-)

[lifeasanamazon]

Wonderful! Wonderful! Wonderful!

I snickered at the owl-hole and then just kind of carried on. I truly love this.

[camillo1978]

Thank you! Maybe a bit more whimsical than usual, but I couldn't resist the image of a hamster-cheeked Snape.

[ayerf]

A far healthier addiction, even with possible bruises from collapsing knees.

She sees his hamster cheeks and martyred expression.

Bwahaha! Oh, the imagery.

[camillo1978]

Uh huh. The whole point was to get that image in. Yay! for the appreciation ;-)

[lillithj]

“Every time you want a cigarette, you munch on carrot sticks until you’ve thought of something else to do.”

Oh, yes! I remember those days well.

She’s managed to snaffle his full attention again.

I really like this sentence and the idea of snaffling attention.

Very nice, lovely transition from one addiction to another.

[camillo1978]

Hello!

Cold turkey and carrot sticks are the way to go ;-)

Thank you. I was trying to think of a very quick way to show that he was already interested. And 'snaffle' is one of my favourite words!

[dickgloucester]

I liked the hamster cheeks, too. In fact, I liked all of it - lovely. I liked the fact that it's not only what he smells, but the way he smells to her that is rescued by his giving up.

Do you remember Patsy recharging her nicotine patches on AbFab?

[acadia_elle]

I do! She had more than the patches did. Although, I really loved it when she made a buzzing sound, and slapped one on Saffy. ROTFLOL remembering.