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Yuletide Potions XIII

Dec 17, 2007 22:48

Title: Yuletide Potions XIII
Team: The Order
Word Count: 8 x 100, though only six will count
Rating: G
Challenges: Broken Memory Charm, Comfort and Joy
Characters: Severus, Hermione, Wendell/Monica

From the beginning
Part XIIWendell held his wife in his arms. Her tears had ceased, but her trembling had not. It was rare for Monica to be so ( Read more... )

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Comments 63

firefly124 December 18 2007, 05:35:38 UTC

Unbelievably, his jaded heart filled with hope, and he was unable to keep from slowly lowering his head toward hers….

Yay!!

sshg316 December 18 2007, 05:39:13 UTC

*bows* Thank you, thank you. *grins*

Um, of course. Who knows what Kel will do with that lead-in ...

*ducks for cover*

tydokia December 18 2007, 16:46:17 UTC

I don't think anyone could resist Monica or Wendell coming in and clearing his/her throat.

Because we all know we can't have Herm and Sev find happiness too soon.

:-P

sshg316 December 18 2007, 16:48:20 UTC

Shh! Don't give Kel any ideas. LOL ;)

ginny_weasley31 December 18 2007, 05:40:17 UTC

SQUEEEEEEEE!

Oh, Shug, my dear, you handled that beautifully!!!! :D

SQUEEEEEEE!

You showed movement and the emotion is great and Severus is starting to get a clue!!!!

SQUEEEEEEE!

*sits on hands and waits for Kel's post so that I can see if he actually gets to kiss her or if they are to be interrupted*

sshg316 December 18 2007, 05:42:31 UTC

*grins widely*

Thank you so much, Gin! I am so relieved!

I hope Severus is starting to get a clue. I can't wait to see what Kel does with the possible kiss ...

WOO HOO! :D

kribu December 18 2007, 06:41:32 UTC

If Severus still won't get it, I'm starting to worry for Hermione and their future together. ;-)

So very nicely done! I really liked the way her parents came around. It's such a shock to them - so it was good to see how her father recognised himself and Monica in her, and how Monica wants to get to know her.

sshg316 December 18 2007, 07:00:24 UTC

LOL I agree!

Thanks, honey. I've been dealing with a sick kid, so I'm glad these even make any sense whatsoever! LOL

dickgloucester December 18 2007, 06:53:07 UTC

Lovely, lovely set! And an excellent last line!

sshg316 December 18 2007, 06:59:15 UTC

Thanks, Dickie! :D Let's see what Kel does with that. LOL

sbrande December 18 2007, 07:09:25 UTC

Oh beautifully done... Now all we need is for Severus to botch the charm/potion that he performs/gives to her parents, for them to die, and all will be happy. Wait... OH, you guys are from the Order, hmmm, we can't have anything like that happen can we.

Oh well, it's good to dream isn't it ;)

Love Sonia :)

sshg316 December 18 2007, 07:16:52 UTC

ROTFL Um... yeah. I don't think that will be happening. *winks*

Thanks so much, Sonia! :D