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Yuletide Potions: Part XII

Dec 16, 2007 22:09

For a long moment, Severus stared into a face that was oddly familiar. Hermione looked at him with that intensity during some of their more heated “discussions”.

“Intentions towards Hermione?”

“Don’t play stupid with me, Mr. Snape,” Wendell said firmly. “Hermione wrote more about you in those letters than she did about that Weasley boy that ( Read more... )

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firefly124 December 17 2007, 12:26:53 UTC

He had been used by others in the past, and he had learned to live with it. He could do it again.

When is he going to get it through his thick head? Doesn't he know by now that Hermione just wouldn't do that? Warm body indeed!

I love the way you've moved both of them forward separately and then drawn them back together in this, even if he's still being clueless.

misstee123 December 17 2007, 15:37:54 UTC

I certainly hope that he wakes up and realizes what he means to her. After all, he's only had a very few minutes to process what Wendell told him in the kitchen.

Thank you so much for reading and reviewing!

cck_brit December 17 2007, 13:21:33 UTC

Lovely, though I feel bad for him. He should not have to "do it again".

misstee123 December 17 2007, 15:36:10 UTC

I'll bet that he won't have to - after all, we are working for the Order here. We just have to see what the next author decides to do to him.

Thanks for reading!

leonix8238 December 17 2007, 13:53:40 UTC

Silly, silly Severus! I love how a man so intelligent is still just a man when it comes to emotions, clueless!!!

misstee123 December 17 2007, 15:39:36 UTC

I know! I tried to tell him to do something last night - a kiss, a touch, anything really - but he just didn't get it. Clueless!

danistormborn December 17 2007, 14:57:20 UTC

Heartbreaking for all of them. Big sigh. Silly Severus and his silly ideas.

misstee123 December 17 2007, 15:40:39 UTC

Thanks for reading and reviewing! I'm right there with you wondering what the next person will do with these people.

mollyssister December 17 2007, 18:15:07 UTC

You held your own once again! My favorite line was “I’m sure you think so.” Wendell nodded knowingly. That made me smile. I really liked the way you changed the mood with each pairing. Wendell and Severus were funny and Monica and Hermione were hurt and panicy. Well done!

misstee123 December 18 2007, 03:02:03 UTC

Oh, thank you so much for saying that! You have no idea how much it means that you feel I'm not letting the standards fall when it is my turn. :D