Prosaica

Nov 14, 2007 07:16

Title: Prosaica
Team Name: The Order
Word Count: 100 x 6
Rating: PG
Challenge: Something You Had to Hear
Characters: Severus Snape, Hermione Granger, Lavender Brown, Parvati Patil, Harry Potter
Authors Notes: Erm... never written drabbles before. Droxy told me to post here and under this challenge?

“Slytherins are so busy valuing cunning over bravery ( Read more... )

2005 challenges, zeegrindylows

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septentrion1970 November 15 2007, 07:13:30 UTC
Nice pieces of conversation.

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dickgloucester November 15 2007, 07:43:43 UTC
Love the bitchy little comment at the end!

And the moment when she sees him sleeping, all defensively wrapped up - very tender.

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kribu November 15 2007, 08:21:33 UTC
Really lovely. The slight uncertainty / insecurity is so realistic.

Lavender's very much in character. ;-)

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a_bees_buzz November 15 2007, 09:07:51 UTC
If it hadn’t been for the war, I would never have fallen in love with him, because he would never have become who he is now. But that doesn’t mean that I love him because of anything that he did in the war

These are some wonderfully revealing moments, but this line is the one that really grabbed me.

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imhilien November 15 2007, 09:11:13 UTC
Very nice! Welcome to grangersnape100... ^_^

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