A Dark Encounter

[acciobook7]

Title: A Dark Encounter (Part 5)
Team Name: Death Eaters, naturally...
Word Count: 700 more
Rating: I don't give a s&*t. The rating is pure porn.
Challenge: Dark!Hermione
Author's Notes: Damn. I need a cigarette.

PART 1

She awoke in the middle of the night, a cool breeze tickling the soles of her bare feet. She glanced to her right, noticing the

Comments

[sbrande]

Okay as always this was awesome, if a little confusing and I shall have to read it again to get the whole drift...

In the second last line you have waste when it should be waist...

I will leave a more accurate review when I read it next as I am in a little bit of a rush to get Hudson, my son, to his private Tap dancing lesson.

First impression though was one of AWE.

'SLEEP MY GODDESS' Indeed!

Loves you, Sonia :)

[acciobook7]

Thank you, dear. Yes, this has not been beta'd... obviously. I'll go fix that little snag right now. *hugs*

[sbrande]

I guess my confusion is the fact that they have a little break inbetween parts??? Yes/No???

Just read it for like the fifth time and understood. In part 22 when she 'clamped down on his shoulder' I thoguht that he was on top, which he obviously is and 'clamping down' is obviously just an expression, where as I thought she came down on top of him. Confused yet? hell I even confuse myself.

THAT IS WHY I F***EN HATE DRABBLES...

Not yours, darkheartwalshes or a couple of other good ones in there who know how to pull them off, but in general they are like that unobtainable orgasm. Am I making myself clear? You know, when you feel unforfilled, well at least I do.

Anyway I'm rambling, have to go back to dance as Hudson has Hip Hop as well tonight... When will the madness end??? Probably when I'm dead!

Love Sonia :)

[acciobook7]

Oh, I hope this wasn't as confusing as it seems it was... *feels guilty* *wants to pull it*

*sigh*

[septentrion1970]

I like to start my day like this ;-D

[acciobook7]

As do I =)

[acciobook7]

Oh, I'll never stop writing. Thank you!

[firefly124]

::fans self::

Oh, you want actual words? Not sure I can come up with any at the moment. Random sounds like "guh," however, come to mind.

[acciobook7]

LOL. Well, thank you for the "guh!"

[acciobook7]

LOL! Thank you very much dear!