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Subtle Seduction

Aug 29, 2007 19:22

Title: Subtle Seduction

Team Name: Spy for the DE's

Word Count: 100

Rating: PG

Challenge: Anticipation

Characters: Hermione/Severus

Authors Notes: I don’t own the characters! The lovely JK Rowling has that privilege. Thanks to lurkerfromoz for her answer to my call for prompts. Her prompt was 'he looked away'. Not beta'd so please excuse my mistakes.

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Comments 13

sbrande August 30 2007, 00:59:30 UTC

Oh very nicely done... Go Hermione go ;)

geminiscorp August 30 2007, 01:16:32 UTC

Hee, hee! and for some reason I don't think Severus will be playing hard to get.
I'm glad you liked it. :)

droxy August 30 2007, 01:01:25 UTC

This challenge could be anticipation :D

geminiscorp August 30 2007, 01:20:55 UTC

Ohh! *runs off to change challenge tag and loyalty* (I'm so easily swayed)

Thank you, Droxy!

a_bees_buzz August 30 2007, 01:36:56 UTC

Clever girl! :D

geminiscorp August 30 2007, 16:08:12 UTC

Yep, Hermione is a smart one! hmmm, I wonder how many books she read on this subject. LOL

acciobook7 August 30 2007, 04:06:45 UTC

Wonderful. It seems we've found your muse here in the sense category. I love how the entire drabble looked fairly innocent until the last line where Severus comes to the ultimate conclusion that he is being seduced. Of course, clever as he is, it's not surprise that he figured that out. Very nice.

geminiscorp August 30 2007, 16:11:02 UTC

Aww, you say the nicest things. Thank You!!! I'm glad you liked it.

It started out very different but I can't say I'm not pleased with the way it turned out. =)

acciobook7 August 30 2007, 22:27:58 UTC

Seriously? Oh, well... I guess to each his own, then, because I thought it was descriptive and brilliant... though, your writings are always beautiful, so I can see how you may be overly self-critical. *still loves it*

geminiscorp August 31 2007, 00:46:11 UTC

Once again thank you for the wonderful compliments. (it makes my insecure muse very happy!) Actually I do really love this drabble. I just didn't phrase my reply properly. Too many negatives - but what I meant was that I am very pleased. LOL

septentrion1970 August 30 2007, 06:05:55 UTC

And Severus seems not to mind her seduction.

geminiscorp August 30 2007, 16:14:12 UTC

*giggles* Nope, not at all!

I like the icon. Very sexy!

septentrion1970 August 30 2007, 16:37:04 UTC

Thank you. I made it with my exchange gift.