Walking The Line

[droxy]

Title: Walking The Line

Team: Mod Having fun

Word Count: exactly 100

Challenge: Condemned

Characters: Severus, Hermione

Disclaimer: No money made, JKR owns it all. No beta because I am a yutz.

Snape walks the line alone in the night, where no one can see.

Condemned by a future he cannot control.

Snape walks the line alone, a line between survival and

Comments

[sshg316]

Nicely done, oh darkest of mods. This reminds me of that song by Greenday ... Boulevard of Broken Dreams. "I walk alone, I walk alone." *sigh* But at least he has Hermione with him. *sniffles*

[droxy]

Uhmmm who's green day? The mod is ancient..;D BLVD of Broken Dreams is the title of some art I saw based on Edward Hopper's nighthawks,

[sshg316]

I'm not exactly a spring chicken. LOL subvers sent me the lyrics, saying how appropriate they were for Snape, so I went to itunes and bought the song. :) It is very appropriate. *sniffles*

[schmoo999]

I really like it...liked it a lot!!

Great job sweetie...bittersweet drabble..my fave.

[amsev]

OH, excellent! I love how this built from line to line. Very, very well done!

[duniazade]

Brilliant! Great insight in what unites the characters while dividing them from the others.

The construction from line to line is very clever and efficient.

[droxy]

you write lovely reviews.. I dont anaylize this stuff when I write it.

[duniazade]

Neither do I analyze mine when I write...I guess it's incompatible. And I'm not always that articulate a reviewer, but this one is inspiring. I might pinch that structure some day.

[droxy]

Plot bunny- and I wanted to be true tot he orginal intent of the challenge.