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Before Sunrise

Jul 07, 2007 23:08

Title: Before Sunrise
Team: The Order
Word Count: 200 (2 x 100)
Rating: R
Challenge: Deception Challenge & Married to Another Challenge
Characters: Snape/Hermione/Ron

Ron awoke to find the bed empty, again. Unaware of his wife’s fondness for rising with the sun until they were married, he’d resigned himself to waking alone and taking care of his ( Read more... )

deception challenge, married to another challenge, closetravenclaw

Comments 31

hogwartshoney July 8 2007, 23:01:49 UTC

Hell, I'd become a morning person for Severus!

closetravenclaw July 9 2007, 00:21:56 UTC

I'd take Snape anytime of day, lack of sleep be damned. *snerk*

snapeophile July 8 2007, 23:39:22 UTC

Oh! I like Deceptive!Hermione. But, that's my Ickle Ronniekins prejudice talking. Great descriptions, with just a few words you wove a complete picture!

closetravenclaw July 9 2007, 00:23:11 UTC

Ron? Ron who? *g* Thank you for the lovely review phile. :)

charmed310 July 8 2007, 23:53:36 UTC

Very good!!!

closetravenclaw July 9 2007, 00:23:40 UTC

Thank you. :)

droxy July 9 2007, 02:00:26 UTC

Very sneaky, poor Ron!

closetravenclaw July 9 2007, 04:19:37 UTC

Poor Ron? POOR RON? Have you been Imperio'd?

Finite Incantum!

geminiscorp July 9 2007, 12:12:43 UTC

Wow, sleeping to lunchtime. What kind of job does Ron have, the lazy bum? No wonder she's inattentive.

closetravenclaw July 9 2007, 18:03:25 UTC

I always figure Ron is a bit lazy (having Hermione do his homework when in school), expecting someone to take care of him. Second-string Quidditch player, maybe?