Common Cold/Sick in Bed Challenge

[acciobook7]

Title: Illusions
Team: Death Eaters
Word Count: 900 (100*9)
Challenge: Common Cold/Sick in Bed
Rating: Erm... probably R
Characters: Severus and Hermione
Warning: Character Death
Author's Notes: This is a pretty dark answer to this light-hearted challenge... though, I must say, I am very pleased with how this one turned out. I may just post this one to

Comments

[mistaria]

Wowza, definitely a twist there.

Good though.

[acciobook7]

Thank you very much!

I love twists =)

[moreteadk]

*is a sucker for DE Hermione*

Awesome. :D (Poor Severus though)

I liked the transistion from the seemingly fluffy to the utter dark, with the slight slip of the tongue. It makes me think that she probably didn't intend to tell him all that stuff before she killed him, but when the cat was out of the bag anyway she might as well rub it in his face.

[acciobook7]

::loves you::

I love Dark Hermione, also. It's just so against the grain.

Thank you for your lovely review! You touched on every part that I felt was significant. Your review summarized exactly what I was going for. Thank you so much!

[moreteadk]

:D Gee! I feel all smart now. ;p

You're welcome

[septentrion1970]

Love it! Love it! So dark! You could add dark!Hermione to your list of challenges.

[acciobook7]

Oooo, good idea!

Thank you so much for your review! You totally made my night!

[darkheartwalsh]

*blinks* wow. Never saw that comming. Excellent!

[acciobook7]

::beams::

Thank you so much! I really enjoyed writing this one... The dark ones are always fun.

[harmony_bites]

Ouch ouch ouch. But it's a good ouch. Didn't see those twists coming.

[acciobook7]

Thank you very much!