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acciobook7 in grangersnape100

Fred and George Strike Again

Oct 25, 2006 11:08

Title: Fred and George Strike Again
Team: Spy for the Order
Challenge: Pumpkin Challenge
Rating: R
Characters: Severus, Hermione, others
Word Count: Drabble- 2300 words total (no I'm not joking)
Disclaimer: Not mine. See JKR.
Donation: Fair's fair. Last week the DE's got it. This week it all goes to the Order. Enjoy!

PART 1

“Come on, Hermione, just try one ( Read more... )

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Comments 19

droxy October 26 2006, 02:11:35 UTC

Mod here... Drabbles 1-9, 14, 15, 16, 18, and 23 do not include Severus. Points wand at rules...on user page.

Still, and impressive amount of points despite the dings. Excellent work to do such a long serial in a single post!

acciobook7 October 26 2006, 17:54:47 UTC

Oh man... *points at self* such a dunderhead.

I really thought it meant that their relationship has to be somewhere in the entirety of the drabble... wow what a waste of points...

And thanks for the compliment! I thought of it at work and decided it was just too cute not to expound upon.

Oh and sorry for all the points to the opposing side this week... just trying to be fair until I choose my team...

droxy October 28 2006, 03:53:53 UTC

Still with those at half points it ain't bad...

You can redeem your points by getting SS in there. Usually most folks forget about Hermione.

queenp71 October 26 2006, 02:19:35 UTC

*giggle* I loved it! Can I use the pumpkin next?

acciobook7 October 26 2006, 17:56:04 UTC

Oh man... if only the pumpkin actually worked... *drools*

queenp71 October 27 2006, 02:51:01 UTC

A girl can dream can't she???

wolf_moonshadow October 27 2006, 05:04:41 UTC

Next they need to play the trick on Snape... Could be interesting. I liked the concept of a wizarding VR.

acciobook7 October 28 2006, 06:12:09 UTC

Oh, that would be so much fun... Perhaps the next challenge? 30 drabbles this week has me a little tuckered out from writing...

YAY FOR POINTS! acciobook7 October 28 2006, 04:32:38 UTC

YAY for the Order! I have revamped certain chapters of this story in order to gain some more points for my chosen double-agent side this week (the Order).

I have fixed Parts 1,2,6,7,15,16,18 and 23 to include Severus in one way or another. I hope you guys still like it! (and I'm sure you'll like the extra 80 points!)

Re: YAY FOR POINTS! droxy October 29 2006, 17:21:17 UTC

Yes you got them now! It is tricky when you write scenes that would not typically have Severus in them. In pronoun drabbles, it is more understood, but the original version of these could have been totally general, and would fit HP100 as well.

acadia_elle October 29 2006, 23:13:08 UTC

Very original. I love Fred and George, and your use of them was brilliant!