Reprisal

[closetravenclaw]

Title: Reprisal (XV-XXII)
Team: The Order
Word Count: 100 (x 8)
Rating: R
Challenge: Dark!Hermione
Characters: Hermione/Severus/Mrs. Black's Portrait/Lupin
A/N: Parts I - VI
Parts VII - XI
Parts XII - XIV
Note to Mod: I managed to mention Snape in all eight.

Comments

[atlantel]

Nicely done, dark Hermione, but she's a poor girl. Once she will get Snape (kill him or not) what will she do? Life will be empty with no goals (I'm not talking about the end, just about the character as it is right now)

[closetravenclaw]

Well, for now, she is a bit obsessed with finding and getting revenge on Snape, that is her goal. And hey, at least she got the doxies out of her hair.

[atlantel]

maybe. I wonder how you will treat her in the end, because she's more than obsessed and is so blind (why would Lupin still be friend with Snape, if he really was a traitor and so on). Though, you are an Order member, so I guess the end won't be that bad *giggles*

[closetravenclaw]

I don't think Lupin and Snape are friends, necessarily, but it is obvious to Hermione now, that Lupin is acquiring Wolfbane Potion, and she suspects Snape as his supplier. As for the end? you will just have to wait. muahahaha.

[snapeophile]

You so such a nice job writing Manipulative!Hermione! I can't imagine what she'll do when she finally finds him. Might there be a 'twisty' ending in store for us, dear? ;)

[closetravenclaw]

Thank you. Snape should watch his back. LOL. A twist? maybe.

[droxy]

God I love this fic! Excellent take on the dark Hermione challenge. I do feel a little pity for poor Lupin, she is going to break his heart. The fact she is using sex as weapon just shows how far down the dark path she is.

Smouldering scenes of seduction too.

[closetravenclaw]

Thank you, drox. Well, someone has to get used and Lupin's mild manner makes his susceptible. *cackles evilly* I think Dark!Hermione is rubbing off on me. (note to self: don't write dark fic in first person *snicker*)

[queenp71]

Excellent...excellent..excellent...i'm loving it! I like the way that she is playing coy for Remus using her desire to get to Snape as a weapon of sorts to encourage Lupin...I can't wait to see more!! Mas, por favor...I want more...

[closetravenclaw]

I like how you compliment me while slyly asking for more (Dark!QueenP). I see manipulation everywhere now, muahahaha.

[wolf_moonshadow]

Oh Hermione, what hath thou done? The plot thickens.

[closetravenclaw]

Hermione has run amuck and is trying to Imperio me to do her bidding.