1998. June 20. Sunset.

Jan 17, 2015 01:18

Title: 1998. June 20. Sunset.    
Author: savvyshka
Team Name: Order of the Phoenix
Word Count: 100 x 3
Rating: PG
Summary: A bit of talking.
Challenge: Dialogue only.
Characters: Hermione/Severus.
Authors Notes: There was a call for drabbles. So here … Hope it's acceptable.

1998. June 20. Sunset. )

dialog only challenge

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madeleone January 17 2015, 08:19:32 UTC
Oh, I love it. Especially when he asks her to dance..."where they all can see." It warms my heart. :)

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savvyshka January 18 2015, 03:35:35 UTC
:) Thank you so much! I'm so happy you liked my little drabble! Yay!

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teddyradiator January 17 2015, 13:46:22 UTC
Breathtaking. To paraphrase Stephen King, like Spring, looking across her garden and seeing Summer waiting there, young and green and handsome.

Acceptable? Perfect, I say. As delicate as lace, as strong as wrought iron. Their voices are pitch perfect. Thank you for sharing this! ♥

Please fell free to drabble here at any time. This is just what the doctor ordered.

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savvyshka January 18 2015, 03:39:57 UTC
OMG! *blushes* Thank you so much for your praise. I don't write Severus often, so I was a bit worried. Thank you for making me so welcome! <3

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articcat621 January 17 2015, 16:24:41 UTC
Awhh. Love them dancing :) very romantic. Xx

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savvyshka January 18 2015, 03:40:54 UTC
Thank you, my darling! Glad you liked it!

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savvyshka January 18 2015, 03:48:01 UTC
Thank you!

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stgulik January 17 2015, 16:28:03 UTC
I liked this! With just a few words you painted a complete picture for me. Their dialogue seemed very in character. A quiet moment in time just for introspection. Thank you for sharing.

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savvyshka January 18 2015, 03:50:26 UTC
Thank you so much for your kind words! So happy that you enjoyed my little drabble.

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