Helpless

[teddyradiator]

He flailes, helpless, hopeless, a tangle of arms and legs pressing down on him, cutting off his air, his escape, his sanity.

The dark spectre that ruined his life shows no mercy; he cries pitifully, but no one answers.

He reaches out to her; she callously pushes him away, cold-hearted, unforgiving, as he knew she would forever be.

He screams, begging

Comments

[madeleone]

Heeee! You really had me going this time, LOL! Poor Crooksie, I didn't see that one coming. Great job!

[teddyradiator]

Thank you so much, Madeleone, for reading and commenting. I was afraid it was a little too obvious, but what can I do when DMuse tells me to write it down! ;) Thank you.

BTW, I have a perfect 5 stars on Ashwinder for one fic only - you guessed it - Do Tell! I bless the day you challenged me with that prompt. I really enjoyed that fic so much and it seems to be enjoyed by other readers as well.

[madeleone]

Aww... that's so cool! I do love that fic, you did a fabulous job from just a few simple prompts. :)

[mimithemuse]

Ha! I love it! :D

Poor Crookshanks...when your Human gets married, your bed priviledges are subject to change. :P

[teddyradiator]

Thank you :) We have three cats and they take these things soooo personally!

[droxy]

Crookshanks rules! Muahahahahaha

Lovely twist on a darkish drabble turned deftly into fluff.

[teddyradiator]

Good to see you out and about, Mizriz Droxy!

[sandlappershell]

Now THAT was funny!!! Loved it!

[teddyradiator]

Thanks, shell! I was afraid it was a little hokey, but folks seem to like it!

[azulkan2]

ROFLMAO! That was great.

[teddyradiator]

Thank you so much! I'm so glad you enjoyed it!