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deirdre_aithne in grangersnape100

Leaving pt. II

Dec 28, 2010 02:39

Title: Leaving Pt. II
Team Name: Spying for the Death Eaters
Word Count: 100
Rating: G
Challenge: Broken (it's apparently too old to still have a tag)
Characters: Hermione/Severus
Author's Notes: These were supposed to be separate drabbles, but then I said screw it - I'm on a kick, may as well call it a series since I'm sure that more will be coming ( Read more... )

deirdre_aithne

Comments 6

duniazade December 28 2010, 22:11:12 UTC

No number of repairing charms had ever healed the broken lines in the stone

I have an ancient marble like that in my kitchen and it's indeed the perfect metaphor for a much-worked soul.

Beautiful again. I can't wait for the continuation - what happened?

deirdre_aithne December 28 2010, 22:52:49 UTC

Heh, I spent a bit of time wondering if Severus would have marble in his kitchen, but the image just seemed to good to pass up.

Thanks so much for your comments. :-)

duniazade December 28 2010, 23:24:07 UTC

A marble slab was common in old kitchens; it was indispensable for pastry work. So there's a good chance Severus would have one, even if the household wasn't posh.

aussiemozzie December 28 2010, 22:32:43 UTC

So powerful and heart breaking. Can't wait to see where this goes.

deirdre_aithne December 28 2010, 22:52:57 UTC

Thank you. :-)

irishredlass December 29 2010, 11:30:22 UTC

Powerful depiction of anguish.