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Seasons of Love

Jun 24, 2010 00:04

Title: Seasons of Love
Team Name: Spy for the Flaming Birds
Word Count: 100 x 5
Rating: R
Challenge: No dialogue challenge
Characters: Severus/Hermione
Authors Notes: Originally written for savine_snape as a prompt response on my journal, but I wanted to share it with everyone :) The title is from Rent.

( Seasons of Love )

delayed_poet, no dialog challenge

Comments 21

bambu345 June 24 2010, 07:21:11 UTC

Wonderful.

I loved the way you captured so much story with such economy,and bravo for Severus to send her, and everyone else, such an unequivocal message.

delayed_poet June 24 2010, 14:32:15 UTC

Thank you!

I'm really glad these worked!

dickgloucester June 24 2010, 09:10:49 UTC

It's been as hard for him as for her. This was a lovely set. I like the structure, and the economy of your recounting of more than a year in so few words but with so much emotion. I can picture it all.

delayed_poet June 24 2010, 15:33:25 UTC

It really has been hard for him. I'm so glad you were able to picture all of it! Thank you! :)

savine_snape June 24 2010, 10:08:34 UTC

*glomps* you senseless.

I love it! Thanks you so much for writing this. I can see Severus being distant whilst they are at Hogwarts and he would be harder on her than any other student but you made me squeal loudly with the last set.

*smooches*

delayed_poet June 24 2010, 15:38:08 UTC

*is glomped and smooched*

I'm so glad you love it!! I really do think he would have been, and I'm glad you approve of the ending!

You are so very welcome!

irishredlass June 24 2010, 11:39:06 UTC

A beautiful set m'dear. I would love to see you write a companion set to this from his point of view. What were those seasons like to him?

delayed_poet June 24 2010, 15:39:41 UTC

Why thank you! And, I just might. He seems quite willing to have his side told, considering he's been narrating it in my head all morning!

clairvoyant June 24 2010, 13:15:09 UTC

*sniff, sniff* Tears of joy. This is quite poignant. Happy, heartbreaking, hopeful and finally happy again. The seasons echoed Hermione's feelings toward Severus: warm, cooling, cold, warming, and then hot. Excellent drabbles.

delayed_poet June 24 2010, 15:41:04 UTC

Awww, thank you so much! *passes the tissues* I'm so glad I managed to accomplish what I'd meant to, considering it was so late, and I wasn't precisely 100% coherent. :)