Comments | grangersnape100: No Time.

windwingswrites in grangersnape100

No Time.

Apr 21, 2010 15:56

Title: No Time (yes, I know, very unoriginal :))
Challenge: No Time
Team: Spying for ladies in black
Words: 100x3
Rating: R
Char: Hermione, Snape
A/N: do not own. Oh, and - rocks fall, everyone dies.

( On that first night, there was no time for foreplay. )

no time challenge, windwingswrites

Comments 18

melusin_79 April 21 2010, 12:01:45 UTC

Oh, that's too sad.
(very nice though:)

windwingswrites April 21 2010, 18:23:44 UTC

Thank you :) I'm happy to know you've enjoyed it.

lifeasanamazon April 21 2010, 12:03:42 UTC

Beautifully done - there's a real sense of urgency.

windwingswrites April 21 2010, 18:24:10 UTC

Thank you very much :) I did try to convey it, glad to hear it worked.

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windwingswrites April 21 2010, 18:28:42 UTC

Aww, sorry to have misled you - it was not intentional. As for them being together - I meant to finish it off with him hearing her voicу calling 'Severus?' among all the floating, but the word limit would not allow. So the meaning is certainly there :)

m_mcgonagall_65 April 21 2010, 12:19:29 UTC

You did a really good job of setting up the mood in each of the three paragraphs. I hope that they are together.

windwingswrites April 21 2010, 18:29:14 UTC

Thank you! I'm sure they are. I'm glad you liked it.

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windwingswrites April 21 2010, 18:30:20 UTC

Thank you very much :) And I'm a sucka for a ton of fandom memes, so 'rocks fall' is very much my cup of tea.