Better Left Said

Feb 13, 2010 22:09

Title: Better Left Said
Team Name: The Order
Word Count: 100 x 4
Rating: G
Challenge: Time Turner
Characters: Hermione/Severus

She knew she could never change history but oh how she longed to. As they stood on the grounds of Hogwarts, students and teachers alike, mourning the loss of a man no one had much liked, much less trusted, she wept.

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aussiemozzie, time turner challenge

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dickgloucester February 14 2010, 11:03:59 UTC
Oh dear - wobbly lip.

Well done.

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alwaysimploding February 14 2010, 11:16:04 UTC
Really beautiful!

Giving him some happiness before the inevitable end.

Poor Hermione! BTW, love the title.

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marsuk February 14 2010, 13:15:37 UTC
aww beautiful

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irishredlass February 14 2010, 13:20:36 UTC
beautifully sad and heart wrenching. I am glad she got the closure and heard the words. It will help her to move on.

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duniazade February 14 2010, 13:38:07 UTC
So sad, but well done - original take and excellent title. *sniffles*

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