Did He Miss Her Friendship?

Jan 29, 2010 16:02

Title: Did He Miss Her Friendship?
Team Name: Death Eaters
Word Count: 500
Rating: PG-13
Challenge: Fantasies
Characters: Hermione, Severus
AN: Thanks to brena for kicking my ass and making me write. This is AU after OOtP, and Snape is still Potions master at Hogwarts. Hope you enjoy it ( Read more... )

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delayed_poet January 29 2010, 21:09:35 UTC
This was kind of cute, really. Severus is such a miserable git, really, but he only does it to himself. I loved that she interrupted that last fantasy.

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astopperindeath January 31 2010, 21:22:27 UTC
i'm glad you found it cute :)

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clairvoyant January 29 2010, 21:53:01 UTC
Mwahahaha! Potter should be happy that Snape is otherwise occupied during lessons, no longer obsessed with his hatred of Harry. Great g-rated fantasies.

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astopperindeath January 31 2010, 21:22:51 UTC
aww, thanks clairvoyant. yeah, i only upped the rating b/c some of the wording was a bit extreme.

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dickgloucester January 29 2010, 22:08:04 UTC
Silly, crabby Severus! I do like this set - it seems to perfectly in character.

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astopperindeath January 31 2010, 21:23:06 UTC
yay! i was trying to write something a bit different, so i'm glad you liked it! :)

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dozmuffinxc January 29 2010, 23:38:30 UTC
He lambasted her abilities in prose, demanding to know if she intended to assist Voldemort in proving that Muggleborns were in fact inferior to than their Pureblood classmates.

Ooooh, ouch! I love the implication that he might "miss her friendship." I can easily see them working together on a basement laboratory and Hermione slowly pulling him into some semblance of normal conversation.

Very lovely! Thank you for sharing :)

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astopperindeath January 31 2010, 21:24:32 UTC
i'm glad this came across as believable :) thanks!

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giraluna07 January 29 2010, 23:56:24 UTC
OMG! He was perfecting his fantasies. :)

Very well done.

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astopperindeath January 31 2010, 21:24:39 UTC
thanks!

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