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The Heart Against Death

Dec 30, 2009 14:04

Title: The Heart Against Death
Team Name: Black Capes and Silver Masks
Word Count: 100 x 3
Rating: PG
Challenge: coldest winter
Characters: Hermione, Severus, Albus, Minerva

Hermione Granger could barely tell if it were day or night as the snow storm threatened to engulf everything. The icy winds rattled her bones and threatened to steal the packaged ( Read more... )

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Comments 14

alwaysimploding December 30 2009, 22:13:12 UTC

Oh, her bravery! And his! Love hero/heroine Severus/Hermione in difficult setting!

apeacefulsleep December 30 2009, 22:23:15 UTC

Me too! Glad you enjoyed it.

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apeacefulsleep December 30 2009, 22:24:08 UTC

Thank you so much. I tried to make the symmetry subtle yet apparent enough to the reader.

droxy December 30 2009, 22:36:23 UTC

Edgy and suspenseful! Welcome back!

apeacefulsleep December 31 2009, 03:16:46 UTC

Thank you, Droxxxxxy.

sourpusss December 31 2009, 02:52:55 UTC

Well done. I really felt the chill... brrr.

apeacefulsleep December 31 2009, 03:17:07 UTC

Thank you. :)

junewilliams7 December 31 2009, 06:06:45 UTC

Yes!!!! They both risked their lives for each other and won. Thank you!!

apeacefulsleep December 31 2009, 21:08:26 UTC

No, thank you! Glad you liked it.