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A Fever Of Two

Aug 07, 2009 01:57

Title: A Fever Of Two
Challenge: Fever
Team: Silver Masks
Words: 100x3
Rating: PG
Characters: SS/HG

It was late, but how late it was, Hermione did not know.

It was quiet and unbelievably dark. The only sounds were the soft padding of her bare, white feet. The floor was freezing but it felt heavenly. She stumbled in madness through the castle. Where she ( Read more... )

fever challenge, apeacefulsleep

Comments 9

m_mcgonagall_65 August 7 2009, 16:28:04 UTC

Very gothic mood! You did a really good job of describing the nuances of this scene.

apeacefulsleep August 8 2009, 04:42:54 UTC

Thank you - the scene around them really stood out in my mind and I hoped I could convey it well enough in words.

droxy August 7 2009, 21:35:20 UTC

OOH its almost vampire like...

apeacefulsleep August 8 2009, 04:43:11 UTC

Uh ohhh, Vampire!Snape.

dozmuffinxc August 8 2009, 14:29:53 UTC

Ooooh, yes. Very Bronte-esque. Thank you for sharing! I should so like to know where this "ends" ...

apeacefulsleep August 12 2009, 01:29:15 UTC

Thank you! And it probably ends in, well, madness. ;)

limonata8 August 10 2009, 18:20:10 UTC

very vampire-ish! Snape seems about to rescue, but 'mad eyes' doesn't seem very promising! lol

intriguing, I like!

apeacefulsleep August 12 2009, 01:29:32 UTC

Thank you!

bambu345 August 23 2009, 19:33:49 UTC

I love the concept of his eyes being mad and that she recognizes the fact even in her delirium.