Well Meaning Friends

May 11, 2009 06:44


Title: Well Meaning Friends
Team: Death Eater Spy
Word Count: 100
Rating: PG
Challenge: Maternal
Characters: Hermione/Severus, Harry/Ginny, Baby Lily Potter
Disclaimer: I am not JKR. I do not own the world of Harry Potter. I make no money from this.

“Oh! She's so beautiful” Hermione quietly exclaimed as she nuzzled closer to the squirming pink ( Read more... )

mrs_helenesnape, maternal challenge

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aussiemozzie May 11 2009, 14:40:41 UTC
Awwww, Hermsy! That's so sad.

Well, at least there won't be kids to interrupt her and Sev? Heh.

I loved this though- very bittersweet. I hope Sevvie can make her feel better.

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mrs_helenesnape May 11 2009, 15:34:51 UTC
I'm glad you liked it. As much as Hermione seems to want children w/ Sev, I don't think it would have been a good fit for them (for this fic anyways :))
Thanks for reading!

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aussiemozzie May 11 2009, 16:13:36 UTC
Yes, Herms might have to watch them with Sev around and in one of his moods.

Loved the story- so much depth in it!

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droxy May 11 2009, 15:12:41 UTC
I love the angst!!!

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mrs_helenesnape May 11 2009, 15:37:58 UTC
Thank you! The plot bunny demanded angst. It scoffed at the warm and fuzzy attempt.

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m_mcgonagall_65 May 11 2009, 19:56:29 UTC
:( Poor Hermione! Well meaning friends. *sigh*

Very well written, by the way. You've conveyed Hermione's emotions extremely well.

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mrs_helenesnape May 11 2009, 22:07:11 UTC
Well meaning friends tend to say hurtful things when they don't know the whole story, don't they?
Thank you!

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writermerrin May 13 2009, 12:53:09 UTC
Ooo! I felt Harry's line like a knife; some people just don't get it. Very well done :)

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mrs_helenesnape May 13 2009, 13:29:35 UTC
Harry can be unbelievably insensitive at times. Makes you want to smack people who say thoughtless things like that.
Thank you for reading!

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