The Fourth Discussion

[camillo1978]

Title: The Fourth Discussion

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[camillo1978]

Oh, I think it does.

[cflower3]

Ah, there is always hope! Where there is life there is hope! :P

[camillo1978]

Hope is bouncing around the corridor, reminding them that they can Apparate to the nearest bedroom if they like ;-)

[portugal_faro]

So little said, so much expressed . This would make the bones for a great chaptered story in my opinion. Thank you for this

[camillo1978]

See, I wouldn't write a chaptered fic with this outline because I like to build a plot first and then hang a bit of romance onto it. I think this is too thin - it's all about circumstances making them wait and not a lot else. A longer fic would be endless description of the circumstances, and a lot of very repetitive longing looks and deep sighs. A bugger to write well! I find the drabble format a great way to write out this sort of idea because you can just do the "highlights" and ignore the rest.

On the other hand, you should read 'Beautiful' by Keladry Lupin. Because she's done a fantastic job of it already ;-)

And saying a lot with few words... well, that's my aim! Thank you kindly :D

[portugal_faro]

You do it very well. My imagination is bouncing.

[voxangelus]

In a manner of speaking... plz to write "Very Little Discussion" *G*

[camillo1978]

~Ding!~

One vote cast.

:D

[bluestocking79]

You've made me very happy, you know. :D And I'm sure that it will be really, really worth it after all that build up. (Or they'll be so overexcited that they're clumsy and still getting to know each other that way and a bit awkward, but that's not very romantic, is it?)

But anyway, it's perfect, and I second Voxangelus' request. Besides, that might still fit under the nicknames challenge. Only imagine what sort of names they might have for each other now...

[camillo1978]

~ding!~

Vote 2

Thank you! :D