Comments | grangersnape100: Hell

averygoodun in grangersnape100

Hell

Nov 10, 2008 19:15

Title: Hell ( Read more... )

averygoodun, darkness goes deeper than light challeng

Comments 43

shefa November 11 2008, 01:12:08 UTC

This is just... guh. *sighs happily

Your use of language here is so lovely, and the imagery is potent and powerful. The reader isn't sure what is happening -- you create just the right dramatic tension. What a ride, well done!

And now I want to know what happens next. *sulks

:)

averygoodun November 11 2008, 02:32:46 UTC

Thank you! I'm glad I got the right tone and tension.

Well, they live happily ever after, of course. ;-)

bambu345 November 11 2008, 01:12:26 UTC

Wonderful. Really and truly wonderful.

averygoodun November 11 2008, 02:31:41 UTC

*blushes* Thank you!

lynelucas28 November 11 2008, 01:15:50 UTC

I really liked this story especially the way you ended it:)

averygoodun November 11 2008, 02:31:20 UTC

Thanks! I'm glad you liked it.

sbrande November 11 2008, 01:24:31 UTC

Oh that was so very moving. Loved it!

Love Sonia :)

averygoodun November 11 2008, 02:30:52 UTC

Thank you, darlin'!

cck_brit November 11 2008, 02:55:19 UTC

Excellent and very moving with amazing images painted with your words.

averygoodun November 12 2008, 03:16:12 UTC

Thank you!