Essence

[shefa]

Title: Essence
Team Name: Order of the Phoenix
Word Count: 100 x 7
Rating: PG
Challenge: For Droxy, comfort and joy
Characters: Severus, Hermione

Essence

Simplicity

Vision blurred by unshed tears, she traced his features, every texture and contour hers to hold.

At last.

Sooty eyelashes fell over pallid cheeks; wisps of baby-fine hair danced, irreverent, in

Comments

[tonksinger]

That was beautiful. Really poetic writing--lovely imagery and specific diction.

[shefa]

Thank you so much -- I'm so glad you enjoyed it. I especially enjoy hearing what you enjoyed the most. :D

[septentrion1970]

Beautiful.

[shefa]

*smiles... Thank you!

[melusin_79]

That was quite lovely.

[shefa]

Thank you! :)

[dreamy_dragon73]

Beautiful and lovely.

[shefa]

Thank you!

[droxy]

Thank you again.

But a Droxy gift with order points??? Honestly....

[shefa]

*snrt... I did offer to spy :D