For You I Will

[zyra321]

Title: For You I Will
Team Name: Spy for the Tattoo-ed Men
Word Count: (100 x 6)
Rating: R
Challenge: homesick challenge
Characters: Hermione, Severus
Authors Notes: Ain't it a bit quiet here? I swear I could yell and hear my voice echoing back. :P As always, thanks to my dear beta,

Comments

[savine_snape]

Wow, Homesick!Hermione mixed with Devious!Hermione, great I love this.

[zyra321]

Thank you! I like to do Devious!Hermione ... as long as my muse permitted it. :) Thanks for commenting!

[duniazade]

Loved the twist, and "matching the stamina of a man in his twenties" was a very nice foreshadowing, while the absence of the Dark Mark was double-edged - it could have been after Voldemort's defeat. Nicely done!

[zyra321]

Thanks!

while the absence of the Dark Mark was double-edged - it could have been after Voldemort's defeat.
That's what the next line is for. It evokes a reaction inside him and he didn't know what it was - consciously. But subconsciously, somehow his body knew that his arm would be marked (had it not be for Hermione doing the time-travel).

Thanks for commenting! I'm glad you enjoyed it. :)

[camillo1978]

Really clever! Lure him away from it all, straight out of Hogwarts, and make sure he never even hears any prophecies.

[zyra321]

Yes! That's what I'm trying to convey here. I was a bit worried that the readers might not get it. Boy, I'm glad I was wrong! :D

In here, no one will comes looking for him, not DD, not Voldy, because she goes back earlier to when he's just an ordinary boy getting through school.

Thanks for commenting! :D

[zyra321]

Yes, I need to confirm that this is a time-turner story, in case anyone's wondering. ;)

Thank you for commenting! :D

[ellebell6]

Very well done, brilliant twist, 5*****

Elle :)

[zyra321]

Oooh ... *marvelling at the stars* Why, thank you, dearie! I'm glad you like the twist. :)