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iqeret in grangersnape100

And Ye Shall Find

Jun 13, 2008 02:53

Title: And Ye Shall Find: thirty-six ~ forty-four
Challenge: hide & seek
Team: Spying for Ebon-cloakèd Men
Words: 100x9
Rating: PG-13
Char: Snape, Hermione, Crooks, Bubo
AN: The earlier bits. *applies face to keyboard* Finally, I get Snape to do things I wanted him to do about thirty drabbles ago. *thunk thunk thunk ( Read more... )

iqeret, hide and seek challenge

Comments 9

a_bees_buzz June 13 2008, 10:06:39 UTC

Beautifully done.

sbrande June 13 2008, 10:18:01 UTC

Fanbloodytastic writing. It felt real, you know what I am saying.

i love the fact that you are telling a story here, whether it be in the confines of 100 words or not is inconsequential, it is still a story that has a legitimate beginning, middle and end.

That's why i don't really like drabbles to much, too much is left unsaid. I think you are covering all the bases here and I, for one, and loving how this story is turning out.

Do you understand what I'm trying, in a round about way, to tell you? I truly hope so.

Love Sonia :)

iqeret June 13 2008, 22:59:56 UTC

*^_^*

a story that has a legitimate beginning, middle and end

Beginning and middle, yes. An end…? Still under debate. -_-;

I prefer longer stories myself, but drabbles are a challenge and they usually fit in between my other writings without taking a year to do properly.

septentrion1970 June 13 2008, 10:54:44 UTC

That last line is really a punching line.

leonix8238 June 13 2008, 14:12:39 UTC

This series just keeps getting better and better!

I love Snape's explanation of how he copes, dry to the point, very Snape yet oddly comforting to hear him say it. Unusual to hear him discuss Lily as well, to be honest I'm surprised he did, perhaps he's developing that soft spot for our dear Hermione.

Looking forward to more!!!!

iqeret June 13 2008, 23:03:23 UTC

Unusual to hear him discuss Lily as well, to be honest I'm surprised he did,

Part of it, I think, is that he knows Harry has the memories and that he would've told Hermione already. So hiding it wouldn't serve any purpose. Which isn't to say he's laying all his cards on the table… That would be unSnapelike. ;-P

mistaria June 13 2008, 20:03:51 UTC

Finally, I get Snape to do things I wanted him to do about thirty drabbles ago.

He's tricky like that, isn't he?

However, I think the build up made it even more poignant now. So Sev was right in taking his sweet time. ;)

Looking forward to more and cheers on the progress thus far!