Fic: Neither Rhyme Nor Reason (8/9)

[gradgirl_07]

Title: Neither Rhyme Nor Reason (8/9)
Author: gradgirl (aka Ali)
Rating: NC-17
Characters/Pairings: Luke/Reid
Summary: When it comes to love, neither rhyme nor reason need apply.
Warnings: Based upon this prompt.
Author’s Notes: Written for a prompt by gypsieheart. Hope you enjoy it. And a huge thank you to cherimola for beta work and comma help. Comments are

Comments

[sleeper6]

Wonderfully done! So relieved that Luke told his parents and their reactions were realistic--of course they're going to worry about Luke.

Reid and Luke making out is always hot but so was their little episode there.

Such a great chapter.

[gradgirl_07]

Thank you! Luke's telling his parents was one of the most difficult to write, but definitely need to be here in. I really appreciate what you said about their reactions. ~Ali

[dani_blondy]

Haha at the "Luke Spilt Something on his Pants" :D

Oh it was a loverly chapter though Reid so kind and caring and setting the pace for the two of them :)

Can't wait for the next Chapter

[gradgirl_07]

Glad you liked that part at the end. :-) Thank you so much. ~Ali

[gypsiesheart]

Ali...bravo my dear! This chapter was brilliant. Love that Reid is so patient with Luke and allowing him to set the pace of things. Love Holden to bits in this one. He is so accepting of Luke. And Lily...*shakes head*. Yeah...that's all I got for Lily mentioning hooking up with Noah!

You're NC-17 stuff doesn't seem like NC-17 at all. It's so wonderfully written...romantic, gentle, sweet and caring with the right mix of humor and honesty thrown in. Sex is suppose to be fun, and enjoyable and you portray that beautifully in your stories.

Part of me can't wait for the next chapter, but part of me doesn't want you to post it because that means it's the end of another masterpiece from one of my favorite writers.

Thank you for taking my prompt and running with it. You did it justice my friend.

[gradgirl_07]

I will forever be grateful for this prompt. It's all you. Glad you liked the way I wrote Lily and Holden in this. And I appreciat what you said about the NC-17 parts. I'm anxious/sad for you to read the final chapter. Thank you so much. ~Ali

[gradgirl_07]

Thank you. Reid does care so much for Luke, probably a shock to him as well. I appreciate what you said about how I wrote the convo with Luke/Lily/Holden. ~Ali

[aljc100]

Ali this was great! Holden in particular was lovely, and almost made me cry ... so did Reid's last text message before Luke spoke to his parents. Gah!

[gradgirl_07]

Thank you! So glad you liked Holden in this and Luke's text. ~Ali